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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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My son Tomas make a new beautiful song I put it up for you to listening to It is a piece in progress but I think it sounds good But I want to know what you think. Lonely RoadTom
Last edited by Toveco; 12/03/10 01:46 PM.
Life is worth nothing without the music
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Toveco, I like this. It's unique. The lyrics are good. The music haunting. Tomas did good work on this one.
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Toveco, I like this. It's unique. The lyrics are good. The music haunting. Tomas did good work on this one.
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@Dan Sullivan Thanks! I think he has what it takes to become a song writer.
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Hi Tom, what a cool song! Is that you or/and your son singing? Cheers, ian
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It's very nice. Your son already IS a songwriter. From here on there's no way back!
He certainly deserves a nice guitar for Christmas :-)
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Hi Tom:
Lovely song and really well sung.
I enjoyed it
God Bless Roy and Helen
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Thanks every one! I am so glad you took the time to listen to my son Hi Tom, what a cool song! Is that you or/and your son singing? Cheers, ian Happy you like it! Haha, It is my son singing, If I do my wife and the cat run out of the house ;-)
Last edited by Toveco; 12/02/10 12:42 PM.
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Toveco,
The music for this is very nice!! I really enjoyed the listen.
I would suggest that your son corrects the lyrics for any grammar issues, they are small, but I think important to fix.
You sound like a proud father and you should be, your son is very talented!
Tammy
I will post the lyric for others:
As your memories turns to gold your fragile body's getting old
Slowly you're falling apart strong is still your beating heart
And though you may not feel regret life's got a final score to set
And though you might long for relief I'll be left alone in grief
Before me lies a lonely road dark without comparison I'll do my best to reach its end perhaps I'll meet you there
In truth we're blessed to have seen the sun as life has no remorse
You can spend your time being on the run but life will run its course
Before me lies a lonely road
dark without comparison I'll do my best to reach its end perhaps I'll meet you there And there were times when you were weak I was so scared I could not speak I should accept that nothings wrong you've been around here for so long
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This song is very deep and haunting. I could hear this as a sound byte in an independent film. Not bad, I actually like this. I would like to see the lyrics polished up a bit more and some of the vagueness of the story flushed out more. Other than that, it's a good rough draft.
Last edited by Gregory Watton; 12/02/10 04:37 PM.
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