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#855029 - 11/03/10 01:30 PM Oh Jeez!  
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This is another rough demo done at home. Vocals aren't quite as I'd like them but its a jolly little song (and Dottie said I had to post it)
Its about a dog who is chaperoning a date.

http://talentscorner.net/audio/152/oh-jeez

"Oh Jeez"

I should have known there'd be trouble
on that very first night,
when I came knocking on your Daddys door.

He said he didn't mind his daughter
going to the drive in
but there was no way we were going alone.


He said the only way,
I'd be courtin' with his daughter
was to take along some company.

But he didn't mean your sister
or your cheeky little brother
he meant his bloodhound and her name was Jeez!


chorus
Oh Jeez, Oh jeeeeeez
what am I supposed to do?
I can handle most advances
but I don't think I stand a chance with,
A dog who has a crush on me too!


Sitting at the drive in
got my arm around your shoulder,
we've got popcorn and a couple of beers.

But watching Casablanca
has never been so hard
when theres a bloodhound with her tongue in your ear!


I've got Bergman on the big screen
your hand upon my knee
but I haven't even kissed you yet.

I can't even tell if
you've got me hot under the collar
'cause that dogs drooling down the back of my neck!!

chorus

bridge
When I got you back home
I was feelin' so confused
didn't know if I should be turning left or right!
But the look on your Pops face
when I scratched you behind the ears
and Jeez recieved a big kiss goodnight!!

chorus


#855031 - 11/03/10 01:38 PM Re: Oh Jeez! [Re: Gary_UK]  
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Gary,

What a great lyric!! The melody is very fitting and think the vocal was really well done, if I had to comment on anything it would be to alter the melody a bit more in the bridge to have it switch things up a bit more, it sounds a bit too the same, but I really enjoyed this, a great listen, very funny, good job!!

Tammy


http://tammyjann.com/
https://soundcloud.com/tamsnumber4
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=1038504

Words are, in my not-so-humble opinion, our most inexhaustible source of magic. Capable of both inflicting injury, and remedying it...
Professor Albus Dumbledore




#855035 - 11/03/10 01:42 PM Re: Oh Jeez! [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Gary,

You know I love this! He did do good didn't Tammy? He's trying to teach me how to use band in a box! But I dunno!

Dottie

#855037 - 11/03/10 01:44 PM Re: Oh Jeez! [Re: TamsNumber4]  
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Hi Gary,

This is great..lots of great lines in here...and I like your voice...how funny...I live the bloodhound with her tongue in your ear...glyn

#855038 - 11/03/10 01:47 PM Re: Oh Jeez! [Re: glynda]  
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Aww thanks everyone


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