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This is another rough demo done at home. Vocals aren't quite as I'd like them but its a jolly little song (and Dottie said I had to post it) Its about a dog who is chaperoning a date. http://talentscorner.net/audio/152/oh-jeez"Oh Jeez" I should have known there'd be trouble on that very first night, when I came knocking on your Daddys door. He said he didn't mind his daughter going to the drive in but there was no way we were going alone. He said the only way, I'd be courtin' with his daughter was to take along some company. But he didn't mean your sister or your cheeky little brother he meant his bloodhound and her name was Jeez! chorus Oh Jeez, Oh jeeeeeez what am I supposed to do? I can handle most advances but I don't think I stand a chance with, A dog who has a crush on me too! Sitting at the drive in got my arm around your shoulder, we've got popcorn and a couple of beers. But watching Casablanca has never been so hard when theres a bloodhound with her tongue in your ear! I've got Bergman on the big screen your hand upon my knee but I haven't even kissed you yet. I can't even tell if you've got me hot under the collar 'cause that dogs drooling down the back of my neck!! chorus bridge When I got you back home I was feelin' so confused didn't know if I should be turning left or right! But the look on your Pops face when I scratched you behind the ears and Jeez recieved a big kiss goodnight!! chorus
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Gary,
What a great lyric!! The melody is very fitting and think the vocal was really well done, if I had to comment on anything it would be to alter the melody a bit more in the bridge to have it switch things up a bit more, it sounds a bit too the same, but I really enjoyed this, a great listen, very funny, good job!!
Tammy
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Gary,
You know I love this! He did do good didn't Tammy? He's trying to teach me how to use band in a box! But I dunno!
Dottie
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Hi Gary,
This is great..lots of great lines in here...and I like your voice...how funny...I live the bloodhound with her tongue in your ear...glyn
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