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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9620491I completed first song of the album "REVELATIONS" Sung by Tabitha Gabor. I'm still in the studio. This one is Salvatore Liggiere's lyrics.
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Can someone give me a critique?
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Hi Joseph
Good for you to be working on an album.... This is not at all my gender or realm of musical preference --- so for what it is worth -- I'll give you my general impressions...
the over all feel is kind of bubble gum music..... so if the whole album is for the young minds... then maybe it can work...
the singer has a nice vocal on pitch etc....... but because of the staccato delivery I don't feel much passion in it.....but it does fit with the bop bop kind of music.
You will need to get feed back from your TARGET audience, if possible. Good luck with your project. ` jm
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Hi Amigo!
I agree with Joyce, on "Target Audience". For me, who admits to not following What's Up in Christian Music Stations too-closely, the Intro took a bit long...the piece YEARNS for "Live Drums", and maybe bring in that Very-Pleasant Flute a lot-earlier.
It's got a good Vibe to it...but felt shy-of Total Jubilation...
Good Luck with it, & Best Wishes, Stan
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Thank you Joice and Tampa Stan,
Yes it is bubble gum rock. It is just the way I write. I'm hoping all ages will like it. I'm not sure what to change right now, but I'll think about it.
Thank you again,
JOE
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Joe,
I think this is a good worship song that will do fine in a church service setting. I agree that the intro was too long for a recording of this type and the music was very "midi" with limited natural feeling.
But it does work. I would investigate the latest versions of BIAB -- they have some real great live drum stuff (and other instruments) in there now.
Kevin
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Thank You Kevin, I don't use BIAB, the drum track was played on electronic drums. All the tracks where played.
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Hi Joseph, I have such a hard time with worship music like this. Because my experience is to live the live of a Christian is a hard job. I mean look how hard it was for Christ. But none of that is apparent in the song.
I think I am probably missing the point perhaps in a church setting this may be the appropriate theme for a certain point in the service.
Tom
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