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This is a song I wrote today for my grandson..he hasn't seen it yet, but i'm gonna try and get him still long enough to sing it...he's always using my audacity to sing stuff...so I'll give him something to sing....thanks glyn
Girl How Do I
Hey girl....I’ve tried to talk to you How and where.....do I find the perfect words When I think of you....don’t know what to do I feel like some kind of lovesick hopeless fool
I’d really like to get to know you My home boys won't let me be They need to get a life,... don’t have a clue They need to grow up..let me set my feelings free
How do I walk up to you With your friends always there How do I get you alone To tell you that I care How do I ask you out With this fear inside of me I wish I knew the answers How Do I…How Do I
Girl …………………How Do I………………………..
I waited all day …for school to end Had the words memorized....in the back of my mind Walked outside to find you,…. in the arms of my best friend I told him how I felt,…. how could I have been so blind
How can a friend ..turn his back on you I’ve told him everything,…. how you make me feel Who needs a friend if his hearts not true The girl I like is the one he steals
How do I walk on by Not wanting to beat him up How do I hold my feelings inside My heart wants to cry All I’ve thought about… is you by my side How do I act like it’s nothing When it’s tearing me up alive How Do I….How Do I
Girl…………………….How Do I
Written by glyn
Last edited by glynda; 05/12/10 06:11 PM.
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changed some of the lyrics and my grandson is 13 and he's working on singing it...and to my suprise, he likes it...thanks glyn
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Hey glyn! Enjoyed the song -- in the age of Bieber-fever, these tween-teen songs are big news . The only part that was a little awkward for me was the "straight up true" line. Sounded a little too much like an adult trying to write for a teenager - but your grandson should be able to tell you if that's in the current slang or not :), JMHO. Enjoyed it! Take care!
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Hi and yeah, I didn't like that one too much either so i've changed that verse some...seems better now . thanks alot..glyn
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