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#813028 - 04/25/10 02:55 AM NO MORE YOU  
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NEW LYRIC -- COMMENTS

NO MORE YOU
©2010 Mackie Humphries
V1
Empty hearts get no satisfaction
Empty souls get no reaction
Without someone to lean on
Here I am almost gone.
PRE-CH
No one to talk to
No one to hold
No more you
CH
Empty arms are reaching out
Empty eyes looking about
Without your sweet loving
Here I am alone.
BR
All I ever dreamed of was our life together
Now it seems everything’s gone forever
You rest at angels feet in Heaven
Only God knows why.
PRE CH
No more real love
No more kissin’ hugs
No more you
CH
Empty arms are reaching out
Empty eyes looking about
Without your sweet loving
Here I am alone.
TAG
No More you

Mackie

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#813036 - 04/25/10 05:20 AM Re: NO MORE YOU [Re: Mackie H.]  
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#813093 - 04/25/10 01:42 PM Re: NO MORE YOU [Re: Randy P. Gendron]  
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Randy--

I wasn't satisfied with the lyric until I slept on it.

RE-READ THE BRIDGE.

Sometimes we don't know why we're left alone.

I appreciate you stopping by, and your well taken comments.

Later,

Mackie

#813118 - 04/25/10 03:34 PM Re: NO MORE YOU [Re: Mackie H.]  
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This is cool Makie!! Cheers on that


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#813133 - 04/25/10 04:32 PM Re: NO MORE YOU [Re: Aaron Johnson]  
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Aaron--

Thanks for the visit and comment.

Mackie

#813185 - 04/25/10 08:51 PM Re: NO MORE YOU [Re: Mackie H.]  
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#813230 - 04/25/10 11:38 PM Re: NO MORE YOU [Re: Randy P. Gendron]  
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Randy,

I think you are right; the last line in the bridge is out--there will be some that say the
dangling WHY, should be rhymed--in this case, I agree with your logic!

Thanks for helping me see the light.

I used to write poetry in my twenties, but now I just feel good if I write something
that a few can identify with.

Mackie


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