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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Hi This is a feel good song - hope it does the trick --- let us know your thoughts on any aspect and Thanks ! http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8769080The Music In Your Mind © words and music by C. Stewart / Joice Marie ( Jan. 19, 2010 ) Chorus----------------------------- The music in your mind Isn't hard to find It's just below the happy hippie hair line The music in your mind Hear it all the time It's just below the I don't have a care line Drift away with every tender note Melt into words of love they wrote Listen to the music in your mind Repeat Chorus.............. Sun yourself with a sunny song I hope it's fifteen minutes long Listen to the music in your mind Laugh with who you dream of Share a kiss with who you love Listen to the music in your mind Chorus... The music in your mind Isn't hard to find It's just below the happy hippie hair line The music in your mind Hear it all the time It's just below the I don't have a care line INSTRUMENTAL BRIDGE.. Don't give in to the din of explosions Don't go near the enemys mines Listen to the music in your mind The music in your mind Isn't hard to find It's just below the happy hippie hair line The music in your mind Hear it all the time It's just below the I don't have a care line ! A LeMoN & McFARTneY ProductioN !
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Hi Joice and Calvin, I'm downloading as I write this, and will add to this in a little while. I really like the lyric, and am happy to see "Broadway style" rhyming going on here--meaning what looks like an identity rhyme: "hair line/care line" but is a very clever and crafty way to proceed, and is rejected by some writers as not being a legitimate rhyme, because it ends with the same word. We know better!!! Back in a bit... ************************************************************ I love it! what an infectious melody! it's a simple arrangement, but it's very well performed, and it feels like an anthem, of sorts. I'm gonna be whistling this in my sleep! Mike
Last edited by Michael Zaneski; 02/16/10 04:31 AM.
Fate doesn't hang on a wrong or right choice Fortune depends on the tone of your voice
-The Divine Comedy (Neil Hannon) from the song "Songs of Love" from the album "Casanova" (1996)
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Hi Joice & Calvin! I really like this a lot! The words and music do make me feel good! And, I can relate to this on a personal level. I get that jammin' in my head goin' on all the time - starts at the oddest moments too - like in the middle of the night. Well done! -Dave
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Hi Mike, Thanks so much for your listen. We sure appreciate it & we also like it when you say we don't suck, thanks ! Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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You two always make me smile, I love the work you two do it always is so cool with a sound that is completely unique and fun.
Wonderful job, now both of you, get out and do some open mikes ok - do some live music. Way too much talent to not do so
love dan
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Wow, very interesting the way the vocals are mixed together. It just gives it a "far out" effect. Calvin's sounding really good on this one, too. Quite enjoyable to listen to.
You forgot to add the la, la, la's into the lyrics!
Is this a "guy in vietnam" type song?
Kevin
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Hello Dave, Hey...thanks a whole lot for taking time to listen to us. We sure appreciate your kind words, glad ya liked it ok. Have a good evening. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Wow, I'm Lost in The 60's Again here!
"Happy Hippy Hair Line"...what a Boffo Line that IS!!!
"CONGRATS" Cal & Mz Gem...this'n' IS a GEM!~
Good Luck with it!
Best Wishes & Big Hugs, Stan
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Hi Kevin, Good to see ya. And we thank you for thumbs up, I think I sould ok here because Joice is in the song :-) Vietnam...no it's not , but I'm glad it appears as something different to everybody. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hi Stan, Hey turn some of them fans off, it's COLD ! Glad ya liked what we're doing here. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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More Lemon & McFartney Magic. "Happy hippie hair line" indeed. What a fun, charming song. Enjoyed it muchly. Donna
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Hi Mike
Hey Thanks !! glad that you like the melody ! Calvin was an easy act to follow here.... we are tickled at your comments. jm
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Hi Dave
Yeah -- glad that you approve and hear all that music too...... I can't make it stop, but I don' want to either ! ; ) jm
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Hi hi hi, Yes! Makes me feel good. Cool clever (hair and care)lines. Unike sound, almost dry, but big still. You two are indeed somthing special!
Ken
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Hi Donna, Always nice to see you. We're glad you could stop by for a listen. I'm smiling real big at your comments, thanks a bunch !! LeMoN http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Wow....had I known, I would have taken my tie-dyed out of the 'ole cedar chest....they're lying right beside the beads and the Woodstock stubs. I love this one....just a great 60's feel to it with great lines....love that chorus. I think you should run, don't walk....and pitch this for tv/movies....I can see the copters flying over head in Nam with this song playing while it takes the folks involved.....somewhere else....for awhile....just great you two.
Jan
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Hello Ken, Hope you're doing well this evening. we appreciate the nice things ya say...THANKS ! Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Fun, feel good song and UNIQUE with a capital YOU. Also occured to me, what a great song to sing to a group of aspiring song writers. Listen to the music in your head! Absolutely!
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Add me to the list of folks it gave a smile to... Yes, "happy hippy hair line" is a great line. I'm usually one of those that is bothered by rhyming a word with itself - but, as Mike points out, this really works. You're not really rhyming line with line so much as "hair-line" with "care-line". With the stress on the first syllables like that, it has a real charm. Early on in the song, I was hearing it with a faster tempo - kinda like "One toke over the line". By the end though I was just sitting here peaceful and smiling. Scott
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Hi Calvin & JM,
The dynamic duo strikes again! Isn't having all that music in your head cool? I always hear something going on in mine and it's strange to think that there are some people who don't have that. How quiet. And sad! Thanks for the pick-me-up! You guys are the best!
Ricki
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OK, this is just cute and good. (Like "Feeling Groovy." At first I wasn't sure about the bridge, but then I thought this would be a neat song for our armed forces to espcape into.
You two make quite a team. The singing sounds very good.
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Hello Janice, Good to see ya ! We appreciate the sweet things ya say...glad you liked it ok. Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewar
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Hi Dan
You really made me smile again with your comments.. You are Such a Nice talented man - Thank you ~ jm
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Hi Kevin
I agree Calvin is really sounding terrific singing : ) thanks for encouraging us... i'll try to add in the la la reference.... ha -- some of the far out effect is caused by being 2000 miles apart I think ; D
Thanks for listening and commenting. jm
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Hi Stan
I KNOW you are an Old Hippie ha ha -- glad that you can relate ! I gotta get over to the lyric board and read what you are up to...... I can't seem to find enough hours to keep up over there --as my musical efforts have grown..... but I do visit a bit now and then. Thanks for finding time to comment here and Big Gal Hugs to you ! jm
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Hi Donna !
So glad that you enjoyed it -- Calvin wears his Hippy Colors well.... jm
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Hi Ken
Thanks so much for your kindness..... we only know experiments with sound -- but then that's pretty fun - so there ya go. jm
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Hi Janice
Thanks ! Your comments make me wonder -- would the troops in Iraq and Afganistan feel the same as the vets from Vietnam...... ?
the bridge was not meant to be war specific -- it's a fine spin mind you - and the words ' Enemy Mines ' - I'm sure is what takes you there - but that's a cool twist for the writers !
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Hi Kim
Yes !!! we can sing what we know about ! thanks for listening. jm
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Hi Scott
Hey - Got you with the Groove in the End !!! - so glad to hear it.... well we can always try it up tempo a bit too. Thanks for your comments and the closer look at things. It helps to get the sense of what good writers are feeling - so Thank you !! jm
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Hi Ricki
Yes - very strange ! -- I always thought what was going on in MY head was the same as everyone else -- in retrospect - how foolish was that ! -- but I sure am glad for what I got ! Thanks for listening to us ! jm
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Hi Jean
Thanks for all your efforts on the Board and Most recently to help Brian's cause.
and Thanks a Big bunch for listening and commenting here. Glad you like the effort. I wrote a few thoughts about the bridge above- seems like it brought the same thought to mind for a few..... so noted ! jm
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Hi Kim, Hope you're doing well. We're having fun with each song & glad you could enjoy this one. Thank you for your wonderful reply. Calvin ! A LeMoN & McFARTneY ProductioN ! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hello Scott, Glad you could stop by for a listen and a smile with us.. THANK YOU VERY MUCH ! Calvin ! A LeMoN & McFARTneY ProductioN ! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hi Rick/Ricki/Rat Good to see ya & thanks a bunch for taking a few minutes of your day to listen to what we're doing. Calvin ! A LeMoN & McFARTneY ProductioN ! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hygiene, Hey, good to see ya & thanks so much for the thumbs up on what we're trying to do here. Have a fun day ! Calvin ! A LeMoN & McFARTneY ProductioN ! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hey guys!
Talk about a few minutes of fun. That guitar rhythm won't get out of my mind! You guys are great!
Alan
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Listened again and loved each time. It is very pretty.
Tom
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Hello Alan, Always nice to see ya ! We appreiciate your visit with kind words ! Calvin ! A LeMoN & McFARTneY ProductioN ! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hi Tom, Nice to see you ! WOW....you listened more than once, hey we love you man ! Calvin ! A LeMoN & McFARTneY ProductioN ! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Can I come and live in your house for a while, there would never be a dull evening with stuff like this going on. I'll bring my own flowers.
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absolute fun! yeah...it's a feel good song, definately!!!
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Hi Mark, Hey....glad ya like what we're doing, thanks a bunch. Calvin ! A LeMoN & McFARTneY ProductioN ! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hi Caroline, Yeah, we try to have fun with our music, and hey.. KEEP PLAYING YOUR GUITAR !! Thanks for listening & being able to enjoy what we do. Calvin ! A LeMoN & McFARTneY ProductioN ! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart
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Hi Alan
Hey Thanks -- Calvin makes some pretty memorable guitar rhythms - I agree ! jm
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Thanks Tom for listening - we appreciate that ! jm
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Hi Mark !
hey if you decide to do a US tour -- please let us know. Thanks jm
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Hi Caroline
thanks for having some fun with us ! jm
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Calvin, Joice....missed this one some how....love the chorus and that you started out with it....the lyrics there are really unique...."It's just below the happy hippie hair line"....that's a killer...lol....enjoyed it....Bob
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