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When The Cougar Makes Her Run

Cougars lay back and wait
The years have made them sly
Patiently they watch their prey
Till passion wells inside
A young man's heart is what they crave
They'll steal it if they can
One web well spun might get it done
A little grease in the fryin pan

Chorus

When six pack abs come up for grabs
They love those buns of steel
Won't rob you blind that gold's been mined
Young at heart never over the hill
No PMS don't need the stress
They kiss but never tell
Fresh game to take there's a soul to mate
When the cougar makes her run

Why should them young girls
Take a stand
When they can't even make him
Feel like a man
She'll treat him right keep it up all night
Until he's had his fill
There's beauty in her wisdom
A subtle grace as she makes the kill

(Repeat Chorus)

Outro
Yeah nothin's left undone
When the cougar makes her run

© 2010 Larry Westfall




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Larry, Larry, Larry,

From a cougar myself, love this..lol....well in my day I could have been called a cougar, not much any more.but do love this, it is cute...glyn

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Oh and Heather is gonna do my cougar song soon, she had a friend to pass away and is out of town, but soon it will be done..glyn

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Larry,
some good stuff here. really like that outro.

have fun,
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Larry,

A well written lyric! A sneaky animal, the cougar. I have never been knowingly attacked by one, probably due to the fact that I believe six packs are to be drunk, not admired. Not sure that the heart is what they crave......maybe someone can clarify.


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Hey Glyn...

Thanks..glad you enjoyed.

BTW: If you have a link to your cougar tune maybe you could post it.
I don't remember seeing it on the boards earlier.

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Very nice, well flowing lyric there, Larry...Hey, you are becoming a force to be reckoned with. This captures the skill level of a cougar very well and tells it in a very cunningly, clever way.

High fives all around!! This would be easy to set to music....nice flow for sure.

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"One web well spun might get it done"

Try--(Well spun web might get it done).

Very cool lyric! I like the concept and you bring it off nicely.

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John...

Thanks for taking the time and your comments.
It is appreciated.

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Great topic and write Larry. No 'nits' from me.

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Hi Larry,

GREAT FLOW !!
Cool write, very nicely done.

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Hi Colin...

Thanks for giving her a look-see and kind comments.

I had to clean up the lyrics a bit before posting.
The clarification on the craving point was possibly addressed in that version...she got the gold mine and the "shaft"...lol.

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Jan...

I appreciate you lookin in.
You know I was very fortunate to have a very talented mentor.
She set up the rules so that I could more efficiently break them...hopefully enough sunk in...

Larry


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Howdy Larry, ain't this a fun one tho'......LOL I luv the
inuendo/ upuendo, of she'll keep it up all nite....yuk yuk


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JD...

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From an official cougar...I LOVED IT! smile Flowed nicely and was well written, not offensive but clever!


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Doug...

Appreciate your time and kind comments.

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Hey Calvin..

Glad you enjoyed...sometimes ya just need to do a fun one.

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Larry,

what do you think of this little adjustment?

the cougar lies in wait
the years have made her sly
patiently she'll watch her prey
from the corner of her eye
a young man's fire is what she craves
she'll quench it if she can
it's a trial of temptation
'til she has him in hand

okay I know I shouldn't make specific suggestions like that. I just couldn't help but think of personalizing that 1st verse.

just having fun,
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Larry--

You have style with this one my friend--a good one to ponder with musication-- should become a fine song.

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Gus...

Thanks for droppin in and commenting.
Yeah...those Italian suppositories come in handy at times.

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Hey Polly...

Thanks for commenting and the kind words.
It is appreciated.

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Hi John...

Thanks for the sugs and for droppin in.

Larry


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Nicely written.

Perhaps sub "Warm lair in cave" for "One web well spun". Web does not relate to cougars.

Good job!

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Hey Mackie...

Thanks for the visit and the kind comments.

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Larry,

Such a great visual song!

Real Nice!

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Hi Stan...

Thanks for the kind comments.

The "web" was just a metaphor for setting a trap that the unwary "victim" might fall into as the spider and fly.

Larry


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G'Mornin' Bro Larry!

Like It overall, but of course, Here Come Some Sugs in the KOS Catetgory, Amigo!

V1: Last Line: "WITH SOME grease in the fryin' pan"

CHORUS: "They kiss but never tell..NO ONE.." (Gives ya a Rhyme to make Hook stronger..JMO/KOS)

V2: "WITH subtle grace..she makes HER kill"

That'll do it. Overall, GOOD'N' Bro...

Good Luck with it...Best "Cougar Song" I've seen so-far!
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Hey Geneva...

Thanks for looking in and for the nice comments.

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Hi Stan...

I appreciate the sugs and the kind comments.

Larry


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