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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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"Wiggle On Inn(Wobble On Out)"
There's a little beer joint the other side of town where everybody goes, to drink 'an hang around The place is so tiny it's hard to find a seat----- no room for dancin less ya got cat's feet. So when ya find yourself thirsty and you've never been, come on down to the........ wiggle on inn
(CHORUS;) Wiggle on inn Then ya wobble on out If you've ever been You know what it's about. so Grab yourself a beer------ and sit on down Holler howdy all around------ good place to go meet new friends At the Wiggle On Inn(wobble on out)
On friday and saturday nights, they're always full The music's just right,and times are never dull Some come as couples and some come alone------ but one thing's for sure when it's time to go home
(last chorus ) You'll wobble on out, cause you already been you got a belly full------------ at the Wiggle On Inn stumble to your car,and try to find yer keys You'll be back next week, to satisfy your needs. At the Wiggle On Inn(wobble on out)wiggle on in, and you wobble on out.....--------(yodel)
Copyright © BY Gary D.Gray/All Rights Reserved 2007(BMI)
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I really like it my man. Although, I think I'm hearing it a little different than you intended. You've got some yodeling there at the end and I was hearing it as an upbeat fast tempo blues/country sounding song. Sort of like a Garth Brooks "Aint Goin' Down Till The Sun Comes Up" kind of feel. But I do like the lyric a lot my friend. Very creative and fun.
Nick W.
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thx Nick there actually was such a place as in my lyrics
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Gary,pretty cool play on the words,Im likin the song ,crafty .No nits here. take care,S.Dee
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I'm not crazy about the 2nd chorus. I'd nix that one for the 1st one. Just my opinion which isn't worth much these days.
"Grits is one of those country-boy words that is both singular and plural-like deer, elk and sheep. I think the singular is appropriate when there's a modifier that makes it clear one is talking about something specific. Like, 'Grits are good for you, but these here grits is tasty.'"~~Joe Wrabek
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Gary,pretty cool play on the words,Im likin the song ,crafty .No nits here. take care,S.Dee thx Dee this is one that I would really like to see make it, it needs that special music vocals
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I'm not crazy about the 2nd chorus. I'd nix that one for the 1st one. Just my opinion which isn't worth much these days. thx Tricia can't please everyone
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