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by Sunset Poet - 04/24/24 08:09 AM
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Folksy-Funky Blues, Bob Dylanesque Vocals...
First Ya Said "I DO" Now, It's ALWAYS "I DON'T"-- Used t' Be "I WILL" NOW It's For-SURE.."I WON'T" Y' Threaten Callin' THE COPS Should I COP-A-FEEL...? Well, HONEY, THAT Ain't RIGHT (That WASN'T "PART-Of-The DEAL!")
USED t' Flash Some THIGH.. & Now You FLASH-A-Frown, You HAVEN'T Flashed a SMILE Since this WHOLE THANG Cooled DOWN-- I'm TIRED of "COLD PO-TATOES" (Yeah!) I Wanna "HOME-COOKED MEAL!" Hey HONEY, THIS Ain't RIGHT (That Wasn't PART OF THE DEAL!)
(BRIDGE) I WORK Each DAY BRING You HOME My PAY Then YOU Take The LOOT..And SCOOT--
Well, Baby, It Ain't RIGHT I Stay LONELY At NIGHT, With ALLA Your SWEETNESS.."VAMOOSED!"
(VERSE) What Started Out SWEET You KNOW..It's Gettin' TART Our Lovin' Flame's DE-RANGED BY That ICE In YOUR HEART... I'm Like a CON-DEMNED PRISONER Who Gets..NO.."LAST MEAL!" Hey, HONEY, THIS AIN'T RIGHT.. This WASN'T "PART-Of-THE-DEAL"
(TAGS) While OUR LOVE's Headin' DOWNHILL I Watch You GREASIN' The WHEELS!... Hey Baby, This AIN'T RIGHT (That Wasn't PART OF THE DEAL!)---
So HONEY, GET CLOSER Tonight.... (REMEMBER..."SEX-APPEAL?"...) The WAY you Been DOIN'..Sure AIN'T RIGHT That WASN'T PART OF THE DEAL...
...NO..I Don't WANNA FIGHT... (That Wasn't "PART-OF-THE-DEAL!")
(C) 2002 by Stan Good, BMI All Rights Reserved.
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Stan, This one's good!! Good male attitude and believable....for some unfortunately. Few lines....tweakin needed... First one....should I cop a feel...hummm could be better...no idea yet fer that one. Cold potatoes...was gonna complain about...but changed my mind...works good So many great lines....like by that ice in your heart...lol I can feel a real good beat on this one. Good job! Pam
[This message has been edited by Hurley (edited 02-16-2002).]
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Hi Stan.. Pretty good...male attitude song..STan.. Agree..you have lots of good lines..goin.on... Have a good (what's left of it) weekend.. Kaley
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HI Pam & Kaley!
Jus' wanta Thank You before this one Slides Off the Page!
Busy Day Demoin' 4 Songs..4:30-11:30 tonight...All "Good Ol' Boy" Stuff!
Sue'll perhaps help me with This One Tuesday!
Thanks for Yours! Big Hugs, Stan
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