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Had this title ever since I saw the movie "The Jackal" starring Bruce Willis. He had a boat named Insolent Minx...it`s been in the brain ever since. "Insolent Minx" © DANOLYRICS 2002 There she stands, At the end of the bar, Acting like a movie star, Drop dead looks, She`s dressed to thrill, Winks promises she won`t fulfill, You better watch out now, she`s on the prowl... She`s flirtin, it`s certain, Doesn`t matter who she`s hurtin, She`ll use em, confuse em, Then blame it on the boozin, She doesn`t care, What another woman thinks, She`s got no morals, She`s an insolent minx. She wins again, As he slips off his ring, Thinks tonight he`ll be a king, Buy me drinks, She says with a smile, And I`ll make it worth your while, But she ain`t a giver, she won`t deliver... She`s flirtin, it`s certain, Doesn`t matter who she`s hurtin, She`ll use em, confuse em, Then blame it on the boozin, She doesn`t care, What another woman thinks, She`s got no morals, She`s an insolent minx. They get caught up in her hype, Almost every man`s her type, As long as you have money, Until last call she`ll be your honey. She`ll be flirtin, it`s certain, Doesn`t matter who she`s hurtin, She`ll use em, confuse em, Then blame it on the boozin, She doesn`t care, What another woman thinks, She`s got no morals, She`s an insolent minx. Always some fool to buy her drinks, She don`t care, she`s an insolent minx. ------------------ www.angelfire.com/music3/danolyrics
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Alright, a lyric about a boozeflooze. Its some kinda sport with them. But you do have to admit we've conditioned them to expect us to buy them a drink in exchange for their company. Maybe we have to set clear expectations. Ok dear, for a shot I get... Fun stuff here Windowman.
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Thats a whacky little romp, I like it. I hear this old time R&B funk thing happening, the cadence of the lyric lends itself well to that kind of groove.
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Dan,
Well written lyrics, but I am at a loss at how to reapond to this portrait. Are we supposed to see the woman as evil? Are we 'hurt' when we get played by a woman in a bar? That's just part of the game. It seems emotionally detached,perhaps because it's written in the third person. Mike
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Cool song, Dan. There's a lot of songs about folks like this on here lately...drinking problems anyone? This would make a great groovin' bar rocker. Corey
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GREAT!!! COOL!! And sadly enough, TRUE! AH, women are wonderful, huh? It's funny tho that they say alcohol is bad for pregnant women. If it wasen't for alcohol, a lot of them wouldn't GET pregnant!!! lol
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Dano Bro! Did you see me in the bar last weekend!! I just wanted the bar tender, he had access to ALL the liquor! Good one Dano! SistaRia ------------------ http://angelfire.lycos.com/amiga/riassonglyrics
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GIRLS RULE!!! This is great Dano, with just a hint of "Maneater". I think your chorus is killer with the internal rhymes. Your second verse is just as good, if not better than your first, which is a huge deal if you ask me. And since it's written in third person, it doesn't matter how unlikeable this minx is. I have to say this is, IMO, one of your very best lyrics to date! Really great job!! Tink
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Johnster, Bear, and Mike, Johnny, Yep...it`s a rule...find out what they`re thinkin, or they does no drinkin. Thanks for stopping in. WalkinBear, Thanks...and it`s cool that you got a groove off of it! Mike, Thanks for looking in Guamguy. Why you keep sayin "we" got played? <g> Just kidding. Sure it`s emotionally detatched...just look at the fella that wrote it! Thanks again men. Dan. ------------------ www.angelfire.com/music3/danolyrics
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Corey and Roy, Corey, That`s high praise indeed! Thanks! Drunkinig prableem? WO NAY! Burp. Roy, Thanks for checking this`n out. Wimmens is wunnerful alright! Nothing wrong with a beer or three neither...specially if SHE`S buying! Thanks again fellers. Dan. ------------------ www.angelfire.com/music3/danolyrics
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Dano,
Fine job on a great lyric. Kudos bro. Goes down like smokey scotch.
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SistaRia and Tinkster, Two of the "Wild and Wicked 3". Hafta wait till tomorrow for my third darlin to peek in, I spose. Glad you ladies approve...I does aim to please. Damn Cindy...that critique alone is worth 3 more frosty CL`s. And Ria...is your foot sore yet? All that kicking on your own butt bout that tarbender! LOL. Thanks gals! Always a fun time when you stop by. Dano ------------------ www.angelfire.com/music3/danolyrics
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Dawg, Thanks kind sir! I`ll drink to that. Dano. ------------------ www.angelfire.com/music3/danolyrics
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Have to say it's pretty bruised DanoBro! (my foot too!) But now I'm back and I can focus all that attention on my guitar player Ria ------------------ http://angelfire.lycos.com/amiga/riassonglyrics
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Another fun one Dan! Your chorus is just fantastic! LOVED the confuse 'em/boozin'. Very creative and original. Yeah this one is reminiscent of Maneater. Good writing Dan!
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Hey DANO...I Missed Readin' This'n', been SO Busy....
So Let's give ya a "KUDOS" and another Shot at the Top with this FINE Fun One!
Loved It, Stan
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Hey Dan, Sorry, I also let this one get away the first time around. This is classic Dano stuff here! I do have a thought for the last line of v1, if I may...either change 'winks' to 'winkin'...or Drop dead looks (She) ain't dressed cheap Winkin promises she'll never keep... Dandy stuff here tho. So glad I made it here. Take care...blessings to you and yours...Clark
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Hi Dan...I enjoyed this very much as well. Imagine my surprise when I came across the lines, "She`s flirtin, it`s certain, Doesn`t matter who she`s hurtin," as I wrote a song less than two months ago called, "I'm Certain You Ain't Hurtin'". I'm going to enclose the chorus of my song here, if you don't mind just so you can get a feel for my song:
I’m certain you ain’t hurtin’ So I’ll just close the curtain On a love affair that’s left me high and dry I’m certain you’ve been flirtin’ At night, while I’ve been workin' But, soon it’s gonna be your turn to cry (c) Tim Keesee 2002
As you can see, a totally different song, but interesting comparison nonetheless. Nice job, Dan!
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Bama, Stan, Clark, and Tim, Bama, Well...I already thanked you, but thanks again. Stan, Thankee Big Guy! Clark, Thanks! I see no reason your tweaks won`t work...just might change them lines. Thanks again for dropping in on this one. Tim, Hmmm...yep, plenty different, but some similar lines. Guess brilliant minds think alike. I`ve had the chorus for this one in the pile for a long time, just never could think of how to "verse it up" until about a day or two before I posted it. Glad you stopped in and liked it. Thanks! Thanks again everybody! Dan. ------------------ www.angelfire.com/music3/danolyrics
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Sorry to be late Dans... This is fabulous writing. What more can I say???? Cheers, Judy
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Mighty solid lyric here, Dan. I can't believe I'm six days late checkin' it out. I'm not crazy about that hook, but overall, it's great. Fine job! Anthony
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Judes and Anth`, Hey...better late than never! Thanks for stopping in...and those thumbzupps. Much olibiged! Dans. ------------------ www.angelfire.com/music3/danolyrics
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Howdy Dano, Nice job. Sorry it took me so long to get to commenting on it. Good portrait of such a loose woman. Never knew a gal like this, however. Great rhymes here. Keep writin' 'em. Bobbie
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Hey Danster......boy am i LATE to this party....sorry it took so long. This is a great little story! Smooooooooooth! Well told and well written!
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Bobbie and Blakester, Thanks y`all! Late? Nah, I just turned the clocks ahead on everyone else. Always appreciate the input from you two! Thanks again! Dano. ------------------ www.angelfire.com/music3/danolyrics
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Don't know if this has been said dan as i am in and outa here quick but I don't think insolent works. I would try absolute myself. realy rocks along Dan. Like it a lot. REgards. Graham ------------------ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/grahamhenderson.htm
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Dano, Nice and tight...great rhyming all the way down. Will be a fun one to hear Pam
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Graham, Thanks for stopping in! Absolute is okay...but insolent is part of the inspiration for this lyric and if you check it`s meanings...it fits this "chickie" rather well. Thanks for rockin on in cobber! Dan. ------------------ www.angelfire.com/music3/danolyrics
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Pamette, Thanks Jerseygirl...drop in any time, always appreciate the company. Dano. ------------------ www.angelfire.com/music3/danolyrics
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Insulting or disrespectful it means down here Dan. I don't see that as the issue here. Regards. Graham ------------------ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/grahamhenderson.htm
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Either I read this too fast, or I have no nits. I have met women like this. Insolent is OK. One of the synonyms in the dictionary is Brazen.
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Hi Dano, pour me a beer and I'll sing this with you cause I know this girl and Jean knows how she is. Tried to pan-handle my hubby at the local club one night with a wink and a promise. I winked back at her and asked the barmaid to serve her a glass of water on me!!. Who's the brazen one? Wasn't the wink that made me do it. It was the twitch in her hip as she winked that got me. LOL. Cute song here for after midnite. Idamarie
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JeanBsis and Ida, Jean, Thanks for stopping in and reading fast! Ida, Thanks for dropping in. I`ll surely pour the beer for ya...but between the two of us, there`s only one SINGER...and it ain`t me! Brazen...after the hip twitch...she`s lucky that`s all you were! Shoulda took her out behind the shed and whupped her a bit! Thanks again ladies. Dan. ------------------ www.angelfire.com/music3/danolyrics
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