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#495410 - 04/22/07 07:07 PM Love Undercover  
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Love Undercover
Copyright 2007 Shayne Vaughan

She's been seein' a guy at work
That she really shouldn't be
She made a vow to someone else
Back in 1993
Her husband won't try to help her
Make things like they once were
This new man makes her feel young
He's ten years younger than her

Chorus:
He sings that song to her by Ronnie McDowell
"Older Women Are Beautiful Lovers"
Someday they might go public with their feelings
But for now they'll keep their Love Undercover

One day in the parking lot
As they snuggled in his car
He asked, "How far do you wanna go?"
She said "I wanna go too far"
So he drove to a private spot
Down an old abandoned road
As their passion fogged the view
Their seeds of love were sown

Chorus:
Again he sang that song to her by Ronnie McDowell
"Older Women Are Beautiful Lovers"
Someday they might go public with their feelings
But for now they'll keep their Love Undercover

Bridge:
She returned home one night
To find her husband cheating too
She moved in with her new love
To complete her rendezvous

Chorus:
She loves to hear him sing that song by Ronnie McDowell
"Older Women Are Beautiful Lovers"
Today they went public with their feelings
They no longer keep their Love Undercover

Tag:
They no longer keep their Love Undercover

#495441 - 04/22/07 10:11 PM Re: Love Undercover [Re: Shayne Vaughan]  
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Hi Shayne

Good hook to work with here. Not sure if using the two syllables for ninteen in the best use for the real estate. Seems like you should use '93 and another descriptive word there. Also I didn't like hearing the name at the end of the sentence so I played with it a bit...of course if you have music and it sounds good, just ignore me. Anyway, that's what I have on the first read. Good luck smile jm

Woos her with the Ronnie McDowell song 'n his singing
"Older Women Are Beautiful Lovers"
Someday they might go public with their feelings
But for now they'll keep their Love Undercover


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#495504 - 04/23/07 02:47 AM Re: Love Undercover [Re: Joice Marie]  
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Thanks Joice Marie.

I haven't recorded the melody yet, but in my mind, the meter works in the Ronnie McDowell line you mentioned.

#495533 - 04/23/07 07:00 AM Re: Love Undercover [Re: Shayne Vaughan]  
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Nothin' to really nit, ShayneMeister...tho this is kinda Matter-of-Fact Reportage here. Lacks the Wit of, say, "Third Rate Romance, Low-Rent Rendezvous" or the Delightful Twist of "She Let Herself Go"...

I'd prolly be More Sympathetic for the Gal here if she discovered Her Hubby cheating on her First...THEN goin' for the Younger Guy.

Good Luck with it...It'll still play well-enough for the Older Gal Set, Methinks.

Big Guy-Hug,
Stan

#495538 - 04/23/07 08:22 AM Re: Love Undercover [Re: ]  
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Hi Shayne,

These lines rock.......

He asked, "How far do you wanna go?"
She said "I wanna go too far"


Calvin


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#495541 - 04/23/07 09:23 AM Re: Love Undercover [Re: Calvin]  
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Thanks Stan and Calvin.


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