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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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I know the meter jumps from verse to verse but that is intentional as the music for each part is meant to be different..
Conversations Overdue (C)2006 Kevin Tinbergen
(V1) I have been your lover But have we ever been in love It's getting past the point Where pretending is fun
(Rise) Let's sit down tonight Let's sit down tonight
(CH) Conversations overdue We've got some truth to get to Things have been silent For far too long
Empty lives with empty views Got nothing to look forward to We've walked around blindy For far too long
(V2) Avoidance.. Avoidance Avoidance was the key If I kept pretending Will the lies become what I need
(V3) Growing apart as we grew up I knew.. but didn't want to see That the passion we vent And the time that we spent Can fade and leave nothing
(Rise) Let's sit down tonight Let's sit down tonight
(CH) Conversations overdue We've got some truth to get to Things have been silent For far too long
Empty lives with empty views Got nothing to look forward to We've walked around blindy For far too long
(Bridge) Breaking the ice Let's kill the status quo And.. Out spills my life There's so much you need to know About the way I feel And have felt for awhile I need you to be more Then a warm body and a smile
(CH) Conversations overdue We've got some truth to get to Things have been silent For far too long
Empty lives with empty views Got nothing to look forward to We've walked around blindy For far too long
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Well put together. Nice and tight.
One idea:
Conversations overdue We've got some truth to get to REAL LOVE HAS BEEN GONE For far too long
~Wolvman~
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k'berg Since you've got the music, I won't attempt to alter.....well, okay, maybe one thing Will the lies become PART OF ME Nice lyric ben
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Hey everyone, Thanks for the feedback.. I'll be sure to keep your thoughts in mind come rewrite time.. Happy to see you enjoyed it for the most part Much Obliged, Kevin
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