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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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Copyright Date 02 Dec 2004 Content v1 Your eyes tell me its over I'm not sure what went wrong Maybe I did'nt assure you Maybe I'm not that strong v2 Tho we still live together Niether one wants to give in So many years of forever Theres no use to pretend Chorus So when I get the courage To walk away from here It seems we've grown so distant Both of us filled with fear Forever's not even here now Just one of us say goodbye I think you've already said it As I look in your eyes v3 Live was so good Love had a place It just dissapeared As it shows on your face v4 Like a permanant building Being burnt to the ground Theres nothing worth saving Just scattered dreams all around Chorus So when I get the courage To walk away from here It seems we've grown so distant Both of us filled with fear Forever's not even here now Just one of us say goodbye I think you've already said it As I look in your eyes v5 I'll always wish you the best All your dreams be fulfilled As we both make our way On this new live we must build v6 What hurts the most Is we'll never know why We just drifted apart Like the clowds in the sky Bridge I guess we could try to start again Its to easy to see this is the end Chorus So when I get the courage To walk away from here It seems we've grown so distant Both of us filled with fear Forever's not even here now Just one of us say goodbye I think you've already said it As I look in your eyes outtro Yes this is the end. This is the end We've always been honest theres no "Need to Pretend
------------------ Poems belong in bookstores. Lyrics belong in songs.
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Hi Nitetrapper It's pretty long but you had me hooked except for the bridge. (JMO) What about omitting verse 3 and using part of that for the bridge? My heart's developed a blank space it goes with your sad eyes when I look at your face something like that..... ------------------ Michelle www.michellerichardsmusic.com"Northern Girl With A Country Heart"
Michelle
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Thanks for the look. Your right the song is a bit long and I'm working on trimming it.Thanks again Ken...
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