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I'VE HAD ENOUGH © 2004 Michelle Ann Richards Verse One Packed up all my stuff Life was getting to tough That ole' gold band That he wore on his hand Seemed to not mean A single damn thing Drinkin' every other night Then starting up a fight Chorus I had enough I looked in the paper Saw a place that I could rent With just enough money that he hadn't spent Started movin', then I got to thinkin' Maybe I'll ask one more time.."Honey, will you stop drinkin'?" Verse Two So I looked my best Gonna put our love to the test Would he hear what I say? Or be the same as yesterday Will he look in the mirror? And see things clearer Same talk as last year He just can't leave his beer Chorus I had enough I looked in the paper Saw a place that I could rent With just enough money that he hadn't spent Started movin', then I got to thinkin' Maybe I'll ask one more time.."Honey, will you stop drinkin'?" Instrumental Break Bridge How many times can I say I've had enough? Lovin' him isn't easy……. Chorus I had enough I looked in the paper Saw a place that I could rent With just enough money that he hadn't spent Started movin', then I got to thinkin' Maybe I'll ask one more time.."Honey, will you stop drinkin'?" Tag Maybe I'll ask one more time…"Honey, will you stop drinkin'?" ------------------ Michelle www.michellerichardsmusic.com"Northern Girl With A Country Heart"
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Darn Michelle Holdin beer drinkin' against a man? Is that the only thing he done? Heheh. I like this line "With just enough money that he hadn't spent" Nice write. uptempo I expect. ------------------ www.soundclick.com/billrobinson Bill Live with a song in your heart
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Mornin' Bill Yeah, poor Alan thinks I'm leaving I guess now I'm due for a lovin' song,before he gets any ideas. I just wanted to write a song that I feel (because I saw my Mom go through it)alot of women can relate to....they say they'll leave but then they think that they'll try one more time because they love their man sooo much. Thanks for the read. Tell Sylvia I said "hi" ------------------ Michelle www.michellerichardsmusic.com"Northern Girl With A Country Heart"
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Mornin' Sqb Thanks for takin' a look at my song...you're right this has Loretta's name written all over it! Now if only I can get it to her, while she's making a come back. would be nice Thanks again. ------------------ Michelle www.michellerichardsmusic.com"Northern Girl With A Country Heart"
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Hi Michelle i like! for fun, my off meter ways lol so i went to the sad faced classified adds and asked for a man who could drink life from my lips outside my house were a hundred pick up trucks all lined up, waiting for a kiss it would be so easy to just say good-bye but maybe i'll give him one more try
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Hello Michelle, This one should be easy for a lot of people to relate too. It can sure cause lots of problems. Good one ! Calvin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewartmusic.htm
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