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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Joined: Jun 2003
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this is a sort of different style than i usually write. ------------------------------------------- i lock myself inside of me to sing my song this echoed perfect melody how can everyone give up on me (so easliy) how can they not see (im)
i am what i am i am what ill always be i am not i am not i am not what you make me
i hear the stir beneath the echo i listen as it rises, the sound is fading but it lets me listen when i want to but it lets me listen when i want to (x2) i am what i am i am what ill always be i am not i am not i am not what you make me
what i am is not what you make me what i am is not what you make me what i am is not what you make me (not what you make me)
oh, oh, oh you cant mold me i cant be you oh, oh, oh you cant mold me i cant be you oh, oh, oh you cant mold me i cant be you, 'cause im me (meee)
what i am is not what you make me what i am is not what you make me what i am is not what you make me (not what you make me)
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I can really feel that you feel strongly about this song...i do think there should be just a little more lyrical content and a little less repetition...I like the subject though...and continue to be just you
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