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We Don’t Make That Anymore
V1 They shut ‘er down today The suits never cared Picked up my final pay But I wasn’t near prepared Now I’m standin’ in this line With plenty on my mind And just a little scared
Chorus I don’t understand Why we can’t build this land Like we’ve always done before There’s gonna come a time We’ll all be standin’ in this line ‘Cause we don’t make that anymore Here in the USA We don’t make that anymore
V2 I’m just a workin’ man Tryin’ to give more than I take But in a foreign land They’re paid a tenth of what I make They load their ships each day Head for the USA Now don’t that take the cake
Chorus I don’t understand Why we can’t build this land Like we’ve always done before There’s gonna come a time We’ll all be standin’ in this line ‘Cause we don’t make that anymore Here in the USA We don’t make that anymore
Bridge A multi-national parade Walkin' out the door They play their game of global trade Pittin' US against the poor
Chorus I don’t understand Why we can’t build this land Like we’ve always done before There’s gonna come a time We’ll all be standin’ in this line ‘Cause we don’t make that anymore Here in the USA We don’t make that anymore
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Goes along good Steven.Good point made along the way also. Is an ever increasing problem as we do this thing called progressing. Just think we are progressing in the worng direction myself. It may sound a begger of a thing to say but Sept 11 and bali both served to keep a lot of people home instead of going to forien resorts because they are cheaper because of the low wages paid there etc. basically slave labour in some of them in my opinion. I often think if it takes a crisis or tragity to make folks take a second look, then it was a crisis we had to have. They say every addict has their own personal gutter level they have to hit before they decide it is time to chtake charge again. Global trade has been around for a long time. It is just we notice it now more because we really have to have that sterio at that price. And those air Jordans etc. Graham ------------------ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/grahamhendersonmusic.htm
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Thanks for the read and comments. Even though global trade has been around for some time, I thinks it's only starting to take effect now. Once the multi-nationals are through with the earth wonder where they're going to go next?
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Hi Steven, Yes a lot of people hate the idea of free trade Nice lyric but I don’t think global trade is all bad. What Graham calls slave labor in the third world is in fact the difference between eating and starving to death for many people. Change is always hard to except but more people living a longer and better life today than has ever been in the history of the world. Lots of things to make and lots of jobs to do that don’t depend on heavy manufacturing and the third world people need those jobs a lot more than the US does, as for as wages are concerned they will go the way of Japan in time. I like the lyric but don’t completely agree with the message. Good Luck Bill
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Bill
Thanks for the read and comments. This is one of those subjects where you're going to get a lot of folks strongly on one side of the fence or the other. Won't be too many fence sitters. I guess my beef is with the multi-nationals whom I think will eventually control so much of our lives because of the power they will wield and it is only their bottom line that conerns them. If the media did not expose what they do in other countries IMHO not much would stop them in exploiting anyone.
There, that's my rant for the year. If anyone else wishes to comment, feel free to do so.
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Hi Steven,
Now do you feel that in Vancouver?? Actually what's happening here is that our dollar is once again gaining ground, making our goods more expensive abroad, and resulting in layoffs due to declining sales.
But good working man's lyric. You might revisit the bridge though. IMO it needs another direction I think...away from "explanation" to how it affected this person personally.
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Re edit of the bridge Getting closer
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Thanks for the thoughtful response.
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Steve, Real good pal. I like the chorus much. And I like the "Line" line too. Cheers, Stan ------------------ Having Fun!!!! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/stanlohmusic.htm
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Hello VNORTH,
Good American song there! I'm probably as guilty as the next when it comes to buying discount priced products.
Hard to stretch the ole dollar without buying foreign made stuff anymore.
Back to the song...
I heard some other lines for verse one, thought I'd share them with ya, since you gave me such a quality critque on my last song. (Much Appreciated too!)
V1 They shut 'er down today The suits PACKED THEIR PAPERS AND LEFT Picked up my final pay FEEL LIKE THERE'S BEEN A MAJOR THEFT Now, I'm standin' in this line With plenty on my mind LIKE EVERYONE ELSE I GUESS
I just figured the suits DID care, they just cared about the $$$ more than the people!
Now, how does that nursery rhyme go?
A tiskit, a NAFTA, ...there's nothin' in my basket!
Thanks to the "One World Horder!!!"
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Hi Steven Just to say, good strong lyric... definitely one of those topics to stir emotion...one way or another... thats a good thing. Ihave no nits to offer Nice job Joanne
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Yeah that bridge is better IMO, but on the re read I got to thinking.
What makes Bruce Springsteen's songs about joblessness so good is that they are stories of life..about what cannot be done anymore, hopes etc. This is a very linear explanation of events.
What if you keep some of the event\cause stuff, but concentrate on him and his family...what it had DONE to them, and how they FEEL about it.
Not trying to slam what you have, just opening up another treatment.
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Steven, From the title, I was hoping this would be a relationship song...."Love? We don't make that anymore.", but you have done a good job with your premise. People are bound to come down on both sides of this issue. There IS slave labor supporting a lot of industries. Most chocolate in America is the result of child slavery on the Ivory Coast. A lot of big corporations are more interested in a dollar than the person who earned it for them. There are people who think people are expendable. You can't argue with them because that's the way they see the world. Personally, I'm for people over profits, but unfortunately that appears to be a minority view. Check out "Homestead Steel" on The Tom Russell Band's "Road To Bayamon" album (Philo) for another great song in this vein. Kurt ------------------ http://kurtfortmeyer.home.att.net
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John Thanks for the read and comments. Made a couple of changes to the bridge.
Steven
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I like this alright but it's just missing a little something in the way of a relatable example....I know you don't have much room to do that but I'd say right in the first verse.....JMHO
Hey, no country has suffered more than we have because of NAFTA
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Hi Stephen, I saw that you were around and about and even responded to others on this post; I assumed you were dissin' me and so I deleted. Anyway, I saved it and here it was: __________________________ Hi Stephen, In case you weren’t aware. . . I can't think of a very famous artist’s preceeding lines but here's what follows: . . . . . "I say, why'd ya say that for When nothin' you got is U.S. made They don't make nothin' here no more." Name that tune? ____________________ With plenty on my mind. . . and I'm Just a little bit scared Then they load their ships each day Head (off to) the USA Bridge A multi-national parade Walkin' out the door Thanks to the game of global trade I ain't workin' anymore All in the name of global trade Nothin's made here no more I'm not makin' enough anymore I ain't got it made no more OUT- CHORUS ending or Chorus ending, period? We’ll all be standin’ in line one day Cause we're not makin' enough (anymore?) Here in the USA We're not "makin' it" anymore. We're barely "makin' it" anymore. We're hardly "makin' it" anymore. I know THAT would mean a title change. ------------------ Terry [This message has been edited by Tall_Terry (edited 06-11-2003).]
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Terry
I apologize for making you think I was ignoring you. I wa just taking them in order and now that you have reposted I remember your comments which I thought were very good and would like to use a couple of lines. They had disappeared and I wasn't sure where they went. Your comments are very much appreciated because you obviously spend time reading the post and effectively critique them.
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In answer to Tall Terry... "People say that there is no work""Union Sundown" Bob Dylan Infidels (Columbia) 1983 ------------------ http://kurtfortmeyer.home.att.net [This message has been edited by Kurt Fortmeyer (edited 06-11-2003).]
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Hey Kurt, If you had the good taste to know THAT, then I'd better take a closer look at your lyrics I knew what song it was (I have that LP; my player is down) but brain damage short-circuited that line. ------------------ Terry
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Stan Thanks for the read and comments
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Thanks for the read and comments.
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Hey, Steven,
I saw this lyric when you originally posted it but couldn't respond due to the emotional nature of the subject. I was, for a while, something of a crusader against the global corporate hegemony until I realized that they can only be stopped if consumers can/will look beyond the low prices brought to them courtesy of the bent backs of the third world workers who produce them. I'm not optimistic.
In any case, I think your song is right on--politically and lyrically. I also think it's true that a piece that contains such direct commentary on such a topical issue may or may not find a niche; but I do think that the song has a definite pedagogical purpose, viz., to expose a very real insidious process occurring in the world today. I also think that what John said about Springsteen's joblessness songs is true in general, i.e., when joblessness (or any social/political issue for that matter) is framed within the dramatic context of a specific individual's life, the listener CAN relate to it better and therefore feel more strongly about the particular individual being sung about. HOWEVER, that doesn't go very far in edifying the listener as to the economic conditions that have caused the song's protagonist's problems; I mean, I can deeply sympathize with a Springsteen character and admire the fictional skill with which Springsteen elicits my response, but that won't necessarily help me to understand how the character got to the point of joblessness. I think your song goes a long way in trying to at least give an unknowing listener a basic sketch of the problem.
In short, I think a writer has to consider the intent of his work early on, and I THINK your intent is to open eyes and change minds. To that end--whether or not the song would make the billboard charts--I think you've done a splendid job.
That being said, I do rather agree with John about the bridge--making it more about the narrator; the rest of the song already lays out the problem well. It seems a good idea to let the bridge link the wider problem as you've stated with the very real circumstances of the narrator's life. Maybe suggest how the problem has affected his wife and kids, or some such.
At any rate, I think it's a piece of well-written social activism in the same vein as Pete Seeger or Woody Guthrie. And can't you just hear Hank Williams, Jr. singing it.
Good luck with it, Mark
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Kurt
Thanks for the read and your comments. This is definitly a topic that has no fence sitters. As I said earlier, even though global trade has been around for a few years, it's only tghe beginning. I will check out Homestead Steel
Thanks Steven
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Terry
Thanks for the read and critique. I'm still not happy with the bridge and may need to take it somewhere else. Your ....and I'm suggestion in v1 is something I had in and may put it back in.
Thanks Steven
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Steven I like the feel of this song. The only nit is the bridge which IMO needs to be either strengthened or changed.
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Hi V North, Yes,things are strange.What else can I say. You put your point of view ,real well.
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Hey,
Read the lyric and must say it flows rather nicely. You did a really good job on this one. Well, I am witnessing the "slave labor" concept first hand by being in the middle east. It is a matter of eating or starving to death, but it's more than that. In some countries, like the middle east, third country nationals travel to more prosperous countries to work because they can't make enough money in their own countries to support their families. So, these people goto more prosperous countries to work and make more than they would otherwise. However, the drawback is this:
When they get to some of these more prosperous countries in search of work, they end up working for bosses who take their passports and force them to work for them for a certain amount of time, anywhere between 5 to 10 years on literally cents an hour. Some of the Third Country Nationals make like $15 a week and they send 99% of that back home to their families. Yes, it is more than what they would have gotten otherwise in their own countries, but they are still little more than slaves. In some of these countries, our own american corporations are responsible for this slave labor where other countries have their own companies who do this. Kuwait for instance, in order to allow us to remain in their country as an Armed Force had to accept an agreement to allow TCN's to work on our base. The different labor companies who contract to us employ these "slaves" and these are the very TCN's who we have to watch because of potential terrorism. The reason we have to watch them is not that they personally might be dangerous, although they could be, but that terrorist organizations might tempt them with a large amount of cash to have them gather intel for them each time they come on to our base. If these people were payed more by the companies who employ them, they might be less susceptible to temptation. Again, good job on the lyric.
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Mark
Thank you for your well thought out and enunciated response to my lyric. I am very pleased that you saw my intent to talk about the bigger picture and what is at the root cause of what is becoming a problem of massive proportion. I'm not sure that we fully undestand or realize the power that multi-nations have and intend to use in the name of profit. It worries me that these giant globals can sue countries that don't agree with their way of doing things ...and win!!! There's an old expression that goes something like "if my friends out of work, that's a recession...when I'm out of work, that's a depression". I think if things continue on as they are going now it won't be long before.....
I am going to do some major work on the chorus.
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Thanks for the comments. I agree on the bridge.
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I'm trying something different in the bridge which used to be
A multi-national parade Walkin' out the door Done in the name of global trade Now I don't work here anymore
Thanks to everyone for help in this.
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Seeing that you're looking at alternatives
Maybe a little more personalization...something like
Me and becky's pregnant Suits didn't know or care Not even for a second Man I wasn't near prepared Now I’m standin’ in this line With plenty on my mind And more' n little scared
also, you have to be careful about becoming preachy....the reader\listener needs to come to your conclusion because they sympathise\empathise, not because you TELL them to...
so maybe chorus starts
man oh man
and in v2 shiploads each and every day heading for the usa they took my job away
then use that cake line in the bridge maybe like
now don't that take the cake pittin me against the poor in the name of global trade we don't make that anymore
just some musings to keep or sweep
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Thanks for the read and comments. Things are going to get stranger.
Steven
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you got alot of great advice... which I apologize that I didn't take the time to read it all. I love your first verse, you have a good grasp on imagery and "real" life lyrics .... the common man and all but you didn't Insult him by making it too simple.. when you included the stuff about GLOBAL trade.. which many factory workers understand alot more about than the rest of us.
I really like it! My only suggestion would be... (and this is a biggie)..
since your hook/title is WE DON'T MAKE "THAT" anymore you never did say what "that" was. and I really think you should.
I KNOW what you mean... instictively... but it's not in the song anywhere. Just a thought you might want to consider, even if you just put it as a punch line in the bridge or something.
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The "that" that was mentioned... it is implied that it means "this and that", no? Your lyric is very well done! I've written a song or two similar theme.
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Thanks for the read. I'm glad that I was able to convey the message to someone such as you who has first hand knowledge and experience with the problem. You also bring another dimension to the issue with your comments about intel gathering etc. In another way it makes my point "money talks"
Thanks Greg and stay safe
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Thanks for the read and the solid critique. I like your ideas and will play with them a wee bit to see if it flows etc
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I've always been a sucker for social lyrics, and these are pretty good ones. I agree that you might give a little more work to the bridge, but overall I think it's quite good. I like the tone of quiet melancholy you infused in the song. Given the concept it would have been easy to get into the whole 'railing at the world's injustices' bit, but you didn't.
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Hi Steven, I'm quite late to the party. Wanted to see what all the commotion was about. Figured another big controversy. Glad to see everyone expressed their views peacably. You've have lots of advice and made a lot of changes. I gather you're still not quite happy with the bridge? Looks ok to me . the only thing I might suggest and don't know if that fits with your thoughts is, second line bridge could maybe be -- "Jobs walking out the door" Or "Of jobs walking out the door? Lookin' good Wy
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Kay -lynn
Thanks for the read and comments. I deliberately did not identify what "that" was because it means so many things and increasing every day. One day we'll all probably be saying we don't make that, and that and that and that etc. I'm not sure but I read once where TV sets are not produced in the US anymore... hmmmm
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That means all the things no longer made in the US/jobs lost through global trade
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Man, this is one of the strongest lyrics I've read in my (very) short time on these boards.
This is so full of plain but smart lines, and I love the US(U.S.) against the poor line. V good.
strong writing, more power to ya'
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Thanks for the comments. I think I've got the bridge to a hapy place now thanks to the input of so many here
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Thanks for the read and suggestion. It might work that way on the bridge...need to massage it a little
Enuf
Thanks for the kind words. Most appreciated
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HI Brother Steven!
I dunno what to say...partly 'cuz I like your Song, HATE to see the Malaise in Detroit (For Instance), yet realize it IS a "Global Economy" nowadays, and it continues to be EACH Country's challenge to Educate Workers (& Encourage Product Development) so they REMAIN Competitive in the World Market.
The US has Grants & Scholarships GALORE, and Educational Loans pretty freely-available. You wanna Change Jobs..you CAN get the Training in MANY a WAY. (Heck, you can join the Military and they'll PAY for your education after your Hitch is completed.) Nowadays, you can EXPECT to Change Career Fields SEVERAL times durin' your lifetime...it's the Norm.
There's PLENTY of Money IN this Nation..(PARTLY 'Cuz OUR Nation's allus Enticed Many a FOREIGNER to INVEST in Our Country..{Check out all the Convenience Stores!}...
Yep, we've lost MOST of our Family-Farmers..our More-Ignorant Assembly Line Workers..& we're fast-losin' our Shade-Tree Mechanics ('Cuz Big Automakers have intentionally made the Repair Details EXPENSIVE for all but THEIR Staff to Obtain)..but there are Plenty of NEW Openings for Nurses & Medical Help Personnel..for Computer Repairmen/Programmers...& Law Enforcement (As the more-Successful Cities continue to Grow/International Terrorism gets more widespread.)
I'm in the Clock Biz.. Hermle, headquartered in Schwenningen, Germany, NOW has a Plant in Amherst, VA that Makes "German" Grandfather Movements for the US Market. Toyota and VW have US Assembly Plants for our Market Segmant. WHY? Because OUR Assembly Line Workers are often Better-Educated than most OTHER Countries & at DIFFICULT Assembly, our Countrypeople DO "Deliver!"
I don't claim to have All The Answers, or even understand All The Problems, but CHANGE is Inevitable. 20 years ago, there Wasn't MUCH of a Cel-Phone OR Personal Computer Industry, was there? NOW look at All The Jobs just these 2 Fields have Generated.
There are MORE..for Sure!
Good Song. Makes ya QUESTION! "KUDOS" For That, AMigo!
Big Guy-Hug, Stan
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There are so many post on this topic that I am not sure if anyone has mentioned this but I am afraid that you have been beat to the punch on this song. Texan singer-songwriter James McMurtry, son of the man who wrote "Lonesome Dove", wrote and recorded a song called "Can't make it here anymore" It is brilliant and he is giving it away on his web site- the download is free. http://www.compadrerecords.com/downloadpages/wecant.html CAN'T MAKE IT HERE ANYMORE Vietnam Vet with a cardboard sign Sitting there by the left turn line Flag on the wheelchair flapping in the breeze One leg missing, both hands free No one's paying much mind to him The V.A. budget's stretched so thin And there's more comin' home from the Mideast war We can't make it here anymore That big ol' building was the textile mill It fed our kids and it paid our bills But they turned us out and they closed the doors We can't make it here anymore See all those pallets piled up on the loading dock They're just gonna set there till they rot 'Cause there's nothing to ship, nothing to pack Just busted concrete and rusted tracks Empty storefronts around the square There's a needle in the gutter and glass everywhere You don't come down here 'less you're looking to score We can't make it here anymore The bar's still open but man it's slow The tip jar's light and the register's low The bartender don't have much to say The regular crowd gets thinner each day Some have maxed out all their credit cards Some are workin? two jobs and livin? in cars Minimum wage won't pay for a roof, won't pay for a drink If you gotta have proof just try it yourself Mr. CEO See how far 5.15 an hour will go Take a part time job at one of your stores Bet you can't make it here anymore High school girl with a bourgeois dream Just like the pictures in the magazine She found on the floor of the laundromat A woman with kids can forget all that If she comes up pregnant what'll she do Forget the career, forget about school Can she live on faith? live on hope? High on Jesus or hooked on dope When it's way too late to just say no You can't make it here anymore Now I'm stocking shirts in the Wal-Mart store Just like the ones we made before 'Cept this one came from Singapore I guess we can't make it here anymore Should I hate a people for the shade of their skin Or the shape of their eyes or the shape I'm in Should I hate 'em for having our jobs today No I hate the men sent the jobs away I can see them all now, they haunt my dreams All lily white and squeaky clean They've never known want, they'll never know need Their [naughty word removed] don't stink and their kids won't bleed Their kids won't bleed in the damn little war And we can't make it here anymore Will work for food Will die for oil Will kill for power and to us the spoils The billionaires get to pay less tax The working poor get to fall through the cracks Let 'em eat jellybeans let 'em eat cake Let 'em eat [naughty word removed], whatever it takes They can join the Air Force, or join the Corps If they can't make it here anymore And that's how it is That's what we got If the president wants to admit it or not You can read it in the paper Read it on the wall Hear it on the wind If you're listening at all Get out of that limo Look us in the eye Call us on the cell phone Tell us all why In Dayton, Ohio Or Portland, Maine Or a cotton gin out on the great high plains That's done closed down along with the school And the hospital and the swimming pool Dust devils dance in the noonday heat There's rats in the alley And trash in the street Gang graffiti on a boxcar door We can't make it here anymore Music and lyrics © 2004 by James McMurtry [This message has been edited by nashvillecat (edited 05-12-2005).]
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Hey Steven, How the heck are you? Give me a call sometime! Been trying to find you! Seems to me you've posted this gem before. Is this a revision? You always write good stuff. Stan ------------------ Having Fun!!!! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/stanloh
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