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#293052 - 11/10/02 03:19 PM I Could've Done Without Doin' You  
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rock n roll... [Linked Image]

I Could've Done Without Doin' You

They said you were the lay of the land
and I'm a slave to my Mastercard
so I headed for a honky tonk saloon
where you were easy and I was hard

but you blew my pay on whiskey n smokes
then said being seen with me'd ruin you
well Baby I could've gone without goin' broke
I could've done without doin' you

they said your legs were butterfly wings
and that you were a helluvah catch
well I must've caught something alright
cos baby, now I'm starting to scratch

I thought you'd be the best I ever had
but honey, I was a nut for screwin' you
cos I could've gone without goin' mad
I could've done without doin' you

your kisses were six feet deep
I was shaken, I was shocked
you were tough and you were tight,
you squeezed the stars from the night
and sweet honey from the rock

but you blew my pay on whiskey n smokes
then said being seen with me'd ruin you
well Baby I could've gone without goin' broke
I could've done without doin' you

I could've done without doin' you
I could've done without doin' you

(c)2002 Robert George

[This message has been edited by couchgrouch (edited 11-10-2002).]


Nashville demos etc:

https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=431939

other demos:

https://soundcloud.com/wabash-cannibal

Amazon Kindle books by Robert George you may enjoy:

1) Americana

2) Teenage Graceland

3) The Will to Be

4) Fort Mystery

5) Wheel Sea

6) My One True Love
#293053 - 11/10/02 10:30 PM Re: I Could've Done Without Doin' You  
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have you been reading too much kc? LOL

A good Ry Cooder type tune.

A lil direct with screwing you, maybe, nuts for getting rolled by you----lil double meaning there.

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Ritt

#293054 - 11/10/02 10:43 PM Re: I Could've Done Without Doin' You  
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Hi Grouch
Ritt knew I'd like this, and of course I do!
You describe so that even I can see the picture behind your words here I hope this one goes as far as you want it to!your friend
kc

#293055 - 11/24/02 07:18 PM Re: I Could've Done Without Doin' You  
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spider n kc, man I missed the boat getting back to you on this. I'm glad you liked it and spiderlady, those lines are kinda direct, that's why I said "nuts" to twist it a little. [Linked Image]


Nashville demos etc:

https://www.soundclick.com/bands3/default.cfm?bandID=431939

other demos:

https://soundcloud.com/wabash-cannibal

Amazon Kindle books by Robert George you may enjoy:

1) Americana

2) Teenage Graceland

3) The Will to Be

4) Fort Mystery

5) Wheel Sea

6) My One True Love
#293056 - 11/24/02 08:46 PM Re: I Could've Done Without Doin' You  
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Oh my gosh! :smile: No play on words here, eh, Grouch? Nice story, but a tad X-rated?

#293057 - 11/25/02 04:26 AM Re: I Could've Done Without Doin' You  
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Boy howdy!!
This looks like a song(once you get music)!!..... That will never make it on commercial radio..too bad.

The initial verses need to be pared down to two.

The chorus could be more expository.. hell make a sex romp out of it why hold back!You already popped your cookies in the verses may as well bring out the cake and ice cream.

This is a lot better than all of the prosic stuff I've read of yours.Write that other stuff for your wife in a diary.

D-Rex


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