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I need some help with a 2nd verse. the first verse, build and chorus is Baby there`s still you I`ve thought about it girl for a long time and now I finally see I cant live another day ooohh without you casue girl this heart of mine is missin you all the time and baby I dont wanna go on oohh dont wanna face another night without you girl I`ve been waiting so long for someone for someone to take your place but it seems like no matter how long I wait baby I still see your face everywhere I go theres you and everything I do theres you see no matter who i try to love your still the one I`m dreamin of every moment that I go through here I am girl still thinkin bout you see no matter what i try to do Baby theres still you
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Welcome to the forum Howard. How you have it set out it is a chore to figure the bits easy. Give it an edit with some gaps twix the bit please. I would try : I`ve thought about it a long time Girl and now I finally see I cant live another day Without you Girl this heart of mine is missin you all the time and baby I dont wanna go on Dont wanna wanna go on without you. Etc etc. The girl was in the wrong place imy book and the others just floated in as i wsa doing that and killing the Ohhhhh. ------------------ http://www.songramp.com/homepage.ez?Who=grahamhenderson
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Thanks graham, absolutly, I did have it set out wrong, silly me. I even had a sentence in the opening wrong. Here it is again the right way.
I thought about it girl for a long time and now I realise I cant live another day oooh without you
Cause girl this heart of mine is missin you all the time and baby I dont wannna go on ooh dont wanna face another night without you
girl I`ve been waiting so long for someone for someone to take your place but it seems like no matter how long I wait baby I still see your face
(chorus)
well anyways , I would love to send you an mp3 so you could hear the mini clip i have of the song. that way you could hear the (oooh`s and aaaah`s so to speak, and see how they fit, and that would give you a great foundation. send me an email Howard377@aol.com, thanx.
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Glad i could help Howard. Do ya self a favouyt though and get it on a sound site. I preffere to hear the whole thing though not clips. I use all sound sites but believe SongRamp is the best one to use at the moment. That way all can hear it and your get a whole lot more feedback than just from me, or sending e-mails to all. Sound files really clog up the e-mail and only get them in exceptiona cases. Feedback thing on songRamp is really stating to swing now and i have found many cusefull links via it. make it downloadabe MP3 as stream does not work too well a lot of the time. And let them knmow here when you ahve it up and where. can also do thsat on the mp3 link site in JPF. Regards. Graham ------------------ http://www.songramp.com/homepage.ez?Who=grahamhenderson
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