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#268969 - 04/30/02 06:01 AM the love song that's not a love song  
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This is what every guy should say to a woman who rejects him.

I've got to roll
copyright 2001 Bob Whitlow

I'm looking at you, but you're looking down your nose
I'm not your kind, I suppose
I can take rejection from you well
I'll go and find somebody else

(Chorus)
You want the truth, I'll tell you lies
You want my love, I will despise
You want me to stay, then I will go
Get out of my way, I've got to roll

I'm wound out, my throttle's stuck
If I stop, then you're in luck
If I leave the asphault and hit the trees
Then you brought me to my knees
If you're the fire, I'm the fuel
If you burn me, then I'll be cruel

(Chorus)

All i ever wanted was your attention
But I guess I failed in my intentions
You can just go back to your snobby friends
Go on, babe, I wish you well
I hope you never see the end of Hell
You think you're a 10, I won't call you an eight
Look out now, I'm telling you straight

(Chorus x2)

#268970 - 04/30/02 11:24 AM Re: the love song that's not a love song  
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Hi Cowboypete
Welcome to JPF,this guy dosen't seem
to handle rejection,well at all.IMO this
singer has a heart full of contempt.Some of
the folks in here will no doubt tell you
to sing this from another persons viewpoint.
As [he's looking at you,but your looking
down your nose].I do think you have a good
song idea though.Heck I scrapped the first
two I put in here[lol].There seem to be a
lot of good writers to learn from here,and
no I'm not saying I'm one of them.Best of
luck regards Cody.

#268971 - 04/30/02 06:46 PM Re: the love song that's not a love song  
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Hey CP: Maybe that's what they SHOULD say, but it better not be what they actually say. Why? Because women buy the majority of CD's in country, and the insults in this one would be detrimental to sales... Some strained lines in here, as well. This verse, in particular:
I'm wound out, my throttle's stuck
If I stop, then you're in luck
If I leave the asphault and hit the trees
Then you brought me to my knees
If you're the fire, I'm the fuel
If you burn me, then I'll be cruel

I'd find a better way to put this idea. /glen

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#1121810 - 01/02/17 02:48 PM Re: the love song that's not a love song [Re: cowboypete362]  
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It's hard to write love songs when you have no love.


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