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Keep Me Insane © 2005 Claire J. Coburn, BMI Lyrics Vaughan Ray Daniel revised 2006 All Rights Reserved My love for you lies so deep, It's now a part of me. You're here but when you're not, There's a cost, there's a cost I know love is all it is.. But I've never felt like this.. Too much love, too much love, Too much love. CH I know it sounds crazy, But you keep me insane. It could be your walk, your talk.. your smile, There's something 'bout you drives me wild. All I know is I love feeling this way, So baby..yeah baby..keep me insane. V2 When I think about you, That's all I can do I can't work and I can't sleep Girl, look what you've done to me. How would I survive, Without you by my side. No more love, no more love No more love repeat ch: bridge: All my friends think I've lost my mind, That's alright because, Crazy is as crazy does. repeat ch: ------------------ God Bless, Claire. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandid=19086
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Thanks Tee,.
For fixing my link ...My PC has been going crazy lately .I use to like it .But Now .it keep me insane lol
Not for much longer ,though .If it wants a good home ,it better behave.LOl Or else out the door! Claire
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Hi Claire,
I loved the mood and feeling this song has and the way it was performed. Very real! Good Song! Good Job.. Liked the echo on the vocal, Nice vocals too.
peace Sub
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I'm with Lat bring those vocals up a touch. Can't fault the lyrics LOL think the mix needs some sorting. Love the sentiments, Gerry ------------------ http://www.gerrycooper.com/
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Claire, Nice country tune. Good lyrics. Don't ask me why?, but I thought of Dwight Yokam when I heard this tune. I 'd say that's good. Good job. terribob ------------------ http://www.soundclick.com/bpficklen
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Hey Claire:
I'm not a true fan of Country, but I really liked this song. Lyrics are excellent and great melody too in my opinion. Agree with the comments that the guit and vocals need balanced better. Thought I heard some timing issues on the guitar now and then.
This one really seems worthy of a better produced demo to me. Like I said though, I don't know much about Country.
Scott
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Hi Gerry Terribob & Scott 59 Thanks for stopping by ,to give it a listen, and commenting. Hope it can be done over ...People are so busy ,especially musicians. Claire ------------------ God Bless, Claire. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandid=19086
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Claire, Missed this one on my 4:00 am passes. Vote with raising the vocal volume. Really like the chorus. With a little country walking bass line...
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Thanks Tom,for listening.
I agree the volume should be up .
Claire
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Claire, Good start with the lyrics. I'll take a listen when you get the new version up, but looks like you guys have a good start on this so far! I'll get back on this another time for round two! See you! Michael ------------------ The OUTLOOK may often appear bleak, but the UPLOOK is always bright! Michael Borges On Violin Michael Borges Praiseworthy Productions
There's nothing remarkable about it. All one has to do is hit the right keys at the right time and the instrument plays itself. -- Johann Sebastian Bach MichaelBorges.comLicenseQuote.com
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I really liked this lyric. To me, there's a fundamental problem with the recording - the "in" of "insane" is dropped out a lot. It ends up sounding like "keep me(uh) sane" which kills the hook. Maybe it's just my cheesy headphones, but to me the key to this song is the "IN-sane". If it comes out sounding like "sane" the whole thing falls apart... The music was nice overall, and the voice was great. I'd suggest, though, that the melody be shifted a little to make sure that "insane" comes out loud and clear, even if you have to drag out the "in". I'd definitely go up in pitch on "in" to get it to stand out and not get swallowed. Just my two cents. - James ------------------ You can really only please one songwriter at a time. Might as well be yourself! :^) Samples of my music at www.soundclick.com/jamesmitchell.htm [This message has been edited by JamesM (edited 01-26-2006).]
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Hi JamesM, Thank you for listening ....I didn't notice that "in",wasn't there ,no one mentioned it. The artist told me today ,he was going to do a better version. So all these suggestions ,will be taken into consideration......Thanks . Claire ------------------ God Bless, Claire. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandid=19086
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Anyone know where Claire is? Someone should get her back to posting!
Brian
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