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#241864 - 06/16/05 09:32 PM Still I Dream of You  
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© 2004/5 V.L. Flawith {SOCAN, ASCAP]

Planning to put this on my first CD... what'cha think?

http://www.soundclick.com/vikkiflawith

lyrics:

Once upon a time
I knew you well, and loved you.
But then the mist closed in -
I lost you in the crowd, somehow.
How will I find whatís lost?
How will I turn back time?
I donít know.
Still, I dream of you.

Life isn't always easy,
oh, how I'd change what's gone, if I could
before we took that road,
before we lost our way, in the dark.
How will I find the strength?
How will I cling to hope?
I don't know.
Still, I dream of you.

I still recall the touch of your hand,
and the light in your eyes.
They say that faith moves mountains Ė
maybe one day it will bring you back to me.

Your face haunts my dreams,
I see you smile once more, in the night,
I still hold on to hope,
one day I'll see the way to find you.
Will love heal our hearts?
Will we forgive the past?
I don't know.
Still, I dream of you.

I still recall the touch of your hand,
and the light in your eyes.
They say that faith moves mountains Ė
maybe one day it will bring you back to me.

How do we find whatís lost?
How do we turn back time?
I donít know...

~~~~~~~~~~~
Thanks - Hummin'bird


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#241865 - 06/17/05 07:34 AM Re: Still I Dream of You  
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Hi Vikki
First of all,its nice to see you here at JPF.

"Still I dream of you":Good title!I really
enjoyed the lyric,shows great songwriting
skills.The way you sing it just makes it more
powerfull.Very emotional!!Nice melody.The music turned me a bit off the first time I listend but on my second listening I thought
the music and your classical vocal really did fit [Linked Image]mmm..I think it all depends on the mood of the listner [Linked Image]Anyway,overall a good
track!!!
Keep up the good work!!!
All the best®
Jan Petter
P.S If you want,pls come and listen to a collab between me and Mr.Louis Twinn.The song
is called "With each step"Heres the link to the post: http://www.justplainfolks.org/ubb/Forum21/HTML/003201.html

------------------
Music is sounds put into a system.Add an emotion and the system becomes personal.
www.jpsmusic.com
JPS at Soundclick
JPS at Broadjam


"You have to react to what's around you in the moment, whatever the music is.
Just think of it as some place you have to enter and you need to find the key."

#241866 - 06/17/05 10:25 AM Re: Still I Dream of You  
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Sound was great , love the guitar.. Lyrics were ok, knew what the message was, mabey just not emotional enough.. I am to new to be doing this.. but I am trying .. Sheila Adkins

#241867 - 06/17/05 05:44 PM Re: Still I Dream of You  
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It was odd listening to this because the melody seemed to flow pleasantly and it was sung well but it seemed to be lacking a musical idea that could be remembered. The lyrics suffer the same condition, there is nothing to latch on to. I guess what I am saying is that you need both a lyrical and musical hook to make the song work- all the skills seem to be in place but the song never lifts off the ground.

[This message has been edited by nashvillecat (edited 06-17-2005).]


"Imagination is more important than knowledge." - Albert Einstein
#241868 - 06/18/05 11:04 AM Re: Still I Dream of You  
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I don't know why I like this so much? It doesn't have memorable lyrics, but it's simply beautiful to me.
Good luck with the cd!
Marge

#241869 - 06/19/05 06:21 PM Re: Still I Dream of You  
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thanks everybody for your comments....

I know it's not a big deal in the grand scheme of things... but this remake just hit #1 on the Soundclick subgenre pop/AAA charts, and is #6 is pop overall. It means a lot to me that folks are liking this song.
H [Linked Image]


Vikki Flawith: Songwriter/Composer, Singer/Voice Teacher

12Feb10- *NEW BLOG: "BE YOUR OWN GURU ;)"

MY STORY & MY MUSIC: http://www.vikkiflawith.com
Be a FAN: http://www.reverbnation.com/vikkiflawith
#241870 - 06/19/05 06:46 PM Re: Still I Dream of You  
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Quote
<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by Hummingbird:
I know it's not a big deal in the grand scheme of things... but this remake just hit #1 on the Soundclick subgenre pop/AAA charts, and is #6 is pop overall. It means a lot to me that folks are liking this song.
H [Linked Image]
</font>

You must have a lot of friends at soundclick [Linked Image]
All the best
Jan Petter


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Just think of it as some place you have to enter and you need to find the key."


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