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by Gary E. Andrews. 02/28/21 08:04 AM
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Don't Go
by Gary E. Andrews. 02/28/21 08:00 AM
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#1173276 - 01/15/21 06:20 PM
It Is Done
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https://soundcloud.com/user-944741980/it-is-done-6They scorned You as the Son of God Those who did mock You and applaud As Pilate set Barabbas free And sent You off to Calvary A crown of thorns upon Your head Scars from the lashes colored red Your shoulders wore a wooden cross Too few were there to mourn the loss Two thousand years have come and gone But Your love continues on Forever strong They gathered 'round to watch You die The air was filled with crucify They nailed You to Your cross of wood Because of words misunderstood Instrumental Two thousand years have come and gone But Your love continues on Forever strong The guilty struggled to accuse Then simply wrote “King of the Jews” And as You spoke Your final word “It is done ” was all they heard Two thousand years have come and gone But Your love continues on Forever strong And as You spoke Your final word “It is done ” was all they heard.
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#1173408 - 01/20/21 11:06 PM
Re: It Is Done
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I can`t believe that there is not one comment on this excellent song, if I hated the content..[i don`t] I would have to say that the content very well written, and the voice outstanding to me. great music too. nice stuff enjoyed this. Lane
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#1173434 - 01/21/21 06:59 PM
Re: It Is Done
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I can`t believe that there is not one comment on this excellent song, if I hated the content..[i don`t] I would have to say that the content very well written, and the voice outstanding to me. great music too. nice stuff enjoyed this. Lane Thank you, Lane for your comments, most appreciated.I took a lot of time writing the lyric and creating the right music for the content Steve
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#1173455 - 01/22/21 02:17 PM
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I agree with Lane. A lot to like about this. My only worry would be that the melody of the first line is pretty much identical to a very well known piece of music. It's so well known that my mind has gone blank while trying to identify it  Can anyone help? Great production, especially the vocals. Hey Gavin that lead-in I believe starts a few songs, and really listening I know i`ve heard in some movies leading into scenes the first seven notes I bet, that is what sounds so familiar to me. Lane
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#1173563 - 01/25/21 02:56 PM
Re: It Is Done
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I agree with Lane. A lot to like about this. My only worry would be that the melody of the first line is pretty much identical to a very well known piece of music. It's so well known that my mind has gone blank while trying to identify it  Can anyone help? Great production, especially the vocals. Thank you, Gavin, for the listen and your comments. If you remember the tune let me know. You've got me wondering now. LOL Steve
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#1173675 - 01/31/21 05:53 PM
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It sounds good to me and it is well written.
GAVIN! I wrote one with Travis a few years ago called "Gypsy Wind" which has the same opening line melody. Maybe that has a forerunner too.
Vic
Thank you, Vic, for the comments. Most appreciated Steve
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#1173763 - 02/06/21 12:24 PM
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All I know, is this song really moved me. It would be hard to critique this song because its hard to be objective when subjectivity suffuses your soul.
Loved it.
Lane, I often wonder as well why some songs don't receive more comments--some just don't put forth the "effort" unless they know someone well I suppose. But Vnorth, you keep posting, and believe me once you're aroud here a while, you'll get more attention.
steady-eddie
Thanks, steady-eddie, for the listen and your kind words of encouragement. Most appreciated. I was on this site with lyrics back in 2000-2005. A lot of what I wrote back then has been put into songs over the past ten years. Steve
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#1173905 - 02/11/21 02:06 PM
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I just wish the word "forgiven" was in there somewhere  JAPOV I hope you'll forgive me for not using forgiven Steven
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#1173994 - 02/14/21 01:56 PM
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Very nice song and very good production.
Not much else to say here that hasn't been said.
REALLY nice job!
Ricky Thanks, Ricky, for the listen and your comments. Very much appreciated. Steven
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#1174016 - 02/15/21 09:32 AM
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Very fine work with this song! A top shelf placement--very poignant!
Mackie
Thanks, Mackie, for the listen and comment. Steven
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#1174200 - 02/20/21 11:22 AM
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Great vocals BTW!  Thank you, JAPOV. Steve
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#1174213 - 02/20/21 09:31 PM
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I enjoyed that, Steve. The gospel can be delivered in a plethora of genre's and being a child of the 60's I hear a lot of late 60s singer songwriter style in your singing and in your "One Tin Soldier" spin on storytelling. I heard it also in the Christian/Pop crossover of the early to mid 70s when the stories of the Bible bore the message. Today it's often blended with contemporary, personal stories or without a scriptural context altogether. The "word" has, for me at least, always been a more effective way to reach us sinners. Well done sir.
Kudos, Mike
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#1174235 - 02/22/21 04:26 AM
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I liked it, and can agree the melody sounds very much like some other songs I can't think of what they would be. But I liked the vocals a lot and the subject. Loved how it ended.
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#1174357 - 02/28/21 06:35 AM
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VNORTH2, I great song to prayerfully reflect on as these lyrics unfolded, especially with Lent and Easter right around the corner. Thank you, Skip Thank you, skip, for your words, most appreciated. Steve
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#1174408 - Yesterday at 09:54 AM
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I enjoyed that, Steve. The gospel can be delivered in a plethora of genre's and being a child of the 60's I hear a lot of late 60s singer songwriter style in your singing and in your "One Tin Soldier" spin on storytelling. I heard it also in the Christian/Pop crossover of the early to mid 70s when the stories of the Bible bore the message. Today it's often blended with contemporary, personal stories or without a scriptural context altogether. The "word" has, for me at least, always been a more effective way to reach us sinners. Well done sir.
Kudos, Mike
Thanks, Mike, for your comments, most appreciated. I try to write lyrics that challenge people to think about the words they're hearing. Hopefully that comes across. Steve
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