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Enough
by swestern. 03/08/21 11:13 AM
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#1173410 - 01/21/21 02:48 AM
Your Aura Glows
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IronKnee
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Hi everyone......My recordings never have been the greatest, but I hope you like the song, anyways! Thanks!! -Tom “Your Aura Glows” By Tom Tognacihttps://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14181473I can see it in your eyes I feel it in my toes I can hear it in your voice Everybody knows You can’t hide it, your body language shows Can’t deny it, true love always grows Being young and a foolish heart Your aura glows There’s that something in your laugh That lingers in your smile And the way you float on clouds As thin as your denial You can’t hide it, your body language shows Can’t deny it, true love always grows Being young and a foolish heart Your aura glows
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#1173545 - 01/25/21 12:22 AM
Re: Your Aura Glows
[Re: E Swartz]
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Loved this. The arpeggio and vocalizations at the start pulled me in right way. The doubled vocals and whistling suited the song nicely. I suggest finding a new melody line and chords for "chorus" (last two lines on each verse) to lift them up a bit and provide better closure, as it feels like you're starting a new verse there.
..ant Thanks ANT.............I appreciate the suggs, too!! Very pleasant to listen to and a cute lyric on a beautiful theme. Thanks, man! Hi Tom. Has a different sound to your norm. Your voice sounds lighter. Pretty sound though.
Vic
Thanks for listening and commenting, Vic. I try to do it different, each and every time. Tom,
A beautiful listen. No nits!
steady-eddie
Thanks, Eddie!! And thanks to all who have listened! -Tom
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#1173676 - 01/31/21 05:56 PM
Re: Your Aura Glows
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Brilliant as usual Tom! Short-n-Sweet, radio worthy... Polish this one up!  Thanks, Man...............always appreciate hearing from you!! This is great Tom!
Love the softly played guitar which is many times your style. Really adds to the song imo.
Beautiful song as is and I was whistling the melody after it was over.
Ricky Hi, Ricky..........and always nice hearing from you. as well..... now, and throughout the many years!! Thanks! And thanks to all who have listened! -Tom
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#1173695 - 02/01/21 12:22 PM
Re: Your Aura Glows
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Nice feel and excellent guitar work. I agree with ant about the melody line and chords for the chorus. It feels too short to me. Your outro runs about 45 secs. Maybe cut it in half and add a bridge to take it to 3:30 + Just some thoughts. Very good production
Steve
Last edited by VNORTH2; 02/01/21 12:23 PM.
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#1173815 - 02/09/21 09:17 AM
Re: Your Aura Glows
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Tom
I've listened to lots of your songs--never realized you have reached the 400 level!
This song could be a little louder overall, and jerk us a little with the CH-- I like your Folk-Rock style a lot!
Write on!
Mackie Hi Mackie....great to see ya! Thanks for listening and commenting. BTW, what is this 400 level that you speak of?
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