Hi Lane
Quite a story and one I'm unfamiliar with. The lyric I think needs more if based on the intro provided. Quite a task but I think it could interest Vic Arnold or maybe Mike Le- who have both been involved in historical collabs if you'd consider this?
It might bring this furum back to the days when there were some genuine helpful ideas here so many you'd be ducking!
Best of luck with it
Jihn

hec John if they or anyone wanted to just take it and run with it, I`m ok with that.its not much of a track" but i`d throw that in too, if anyone wanted it.. But i`m sure they would have their own ideas. I don`t want to do anymore with it but would give it away....

and your right, I used to get so much helpful thoughts here, it has slowed way down, but I have too, I used to be on the boards way more than I am now. I stick a little writing, or song on just to stay active. That might be the same for others. Lane

I love the atmosphere you create with the cymbals and the voices, that rumble and then the drums. It's really well done. It feels almost symphonic. This is so different from anything that I've attempted that I don't really have any suggestions or advice, other than to say it has real potential.