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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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https://soundclick.com/r/s8ft11And... [V] And I... have always loved you and I...have always cared. you...have always loved me And you...have always been there. [C] and you as long as you're with me will be the beginning, middle, and end. of my never-ending love story. you my wife, lover, And friend. [V] And I... wake up each morning, feel your body touch mine. time...stops in that instant, what I sense can't be defined. [C] when you...snuggle in closer. you my beginning, middle, and end. I cherish those moments. With you my wife, lover, And friend. [V] And I only go through the motions. of life when you're not in my sight. my day...only has meaning, purpose when I hold you real tight. [C] And you...as long as you're with me will be the beginning, middle, and end. of my never-ending love story. with you my wife, my lover, And friend. [Tag] And... Words and Music by Douglas Murphy Copyright (c) 2021 by Douglas Murphy doug_murphy6@sympatico.ca www.soundclick.com/dougmurphy
Last edited by Douglas Murphy; 01/08/21 10:02 PM.
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Very nice. But I am not sure "And" is the right hook/title for this. I mean, why? Other than that, it's all very smooth and professional sounding.
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Thank you SB52. That is two critiques questioning the title/hook.
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Happy New Year Doug! Nice intro, sentiments and whole tune. Good to see you posting, hope its a better year for us all in every way Keep writing Regards John
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