Here is one of my songs.
Rough demo: My voice + ukulele

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=14149842

Hi Guy.

I think you have a delightful melody here. It reminds me of a folk-early Pop song "Pre-British invasion" song from a more innocent time. I could see several directions arrangement-wise. My main sug is with your Bridge. I feel lyrically there you could improve the song by not re-iterating the 3rd line--not needed and taking away from a more potentially/powerful bridge resolve. You might even experiment there with a more specific statement? Phonetically, I also feel with this "older fashioned" vibe that the 2nd bridge line begs to rhyme immediately with the 1st line. Then, have the 3rd bridge line make a dramatic (non rhyming) reflective/modifying statement--this is the "climax" of your song. Your solo following is perfect, then we're ready to return to the song's ending having made the fun detour. This will allow the bridge to create song build and divide the song better with that needed break--JMO, keep or sweep.....

Great start, nice classic chord progression,

steady-eddie

Hey there Guy..................a very pleasant tune, in deed. Very simple, with a clear lovely message.
Thanks guy............
-Tom