She loves me she loves me not

#1170503 - 10/31/20 02:13 PM She loves me she loves me not
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 663 ckiphen Top 500 Poster
ckiphen Top 500 Poster Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 663 - Select One - huntsville, te...	https://soundcloud.com/carroll-kiphen/she-loves-me-she-loves-me-not Jase Leow music and vocals/ Carroll Kiphen lyrics She loves me, she loves me not Verse It’s back and forth, to and fro. I’m a yoyo on her string. Has me at her beck and call. Waiting for the phone to ring. Chorus She loves me, she loves me not Which one will it be? The green for go, red for no Will she stay or leave? She loves me, she loves me not What should I believe? Verse It’s off it’s on, hot and cold. Keeps me guessing her next move. Plays a game of tug of war. With me and another dude. Chorus She loves me, she loves me not Which one will it be? The green for go, red for no Will she stay or leave? She loves me, she loves me not What should I believe? Bridge I figure that I’ll pop the question. Hold her to yes or no. Better a broken heart than wonder. Should I stay, should I go? Chorus She loves me, she loves me not Which one will it be? The green for go, red for no Will she stay or leave? She loves me, she loves me not What should I believe? Last edited by ckiphen; 10/31/20 02:15 PM. Ckiphen

#1170674 - 11/06/20 12:37 AM Re: She loves me she loves me not [Re: ckiphen]
Joined: Dec 2016 Posts: 1,372 Deej56 Top 200 Poster
Deej56 Top 200 Poster Joined: Dec 2016 Posts: 1,372	Carroll, Nice contemporary pop sound and feel to this—Jase did a great job. He made some nice choices on the lyric changes, playing up the “She loves me, she loves me not hook” really well. Totally 80’s pop for me—well done! Kind regards, Deej

#1170700 - 11/06/20 01:20 PM Re: She loves me she loves me not [Re: ckiphen]
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ckiphen Top 500 Poster Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 663 - Select One - huntsville, te...	Thanks for the feedback. Ckiphen

#1171108 - 11/14/20 10:45 PM Re: She loves me she loves me not [Re: ckiphen]
Joined: Nov 2011 Posts: 3,643 E Swartz
E Swartz Top 100 Poster Joined: Nov 2011 Posts: 3,643 Ohio	Hey Carroll, Definitely 80's sound for sure. I'd prefer hearing a little less reverb on the vocals and the disco drum beat brought down about 2 db. since the 80's are over. This would bring the vocals up slightly and more prominent--JMO. The outro solo a bit vanilla, which could be enhanced IMO. I really like the melody and performance which is standard for you--enjoyed the song! steady-eddie

#1171120 - 11/15/20 01:04 PM Re: She loves me she loves me not [Re: ckiphen]
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ckiphen Top 500 Poster Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 663 - Select One - huntsville, te...	Appreciate the feedback Eddie. Thanks Ckiphen

#1171151 - 11/16/20 05:14 AM Re: She loves me she loves me not [Re: ckiphen]
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 12,065 Travis david Top 10 Poster
Travis david Top 10 Poster Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 12,065 Kendal, Cumbria .UK	Hi Carroll A good pop song something different which is always welcome Best of luck with it for all concerned Regards John We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde

#1171181 - 11/16/20 03:35 PM Re: She loves me she loves me not [Re: ckiphen]
Joined: Oct 2019 Posts: 165 PaulCanuck Serious Contributor
PaulCanuck Serious Contributor Joined: Oct 2019 Posts: 165	Nice retro pop song guys! Love the percussion and the way the melody changes up in the chorus - really gives it a lift Reminds me of Hall and Oats. Yeah - maybe back off the reverb a bit would be good advice. No other nits from me though. cheers Paul

#1171391 - 11/20/20 11:32 PM Re: She loves me she loves me not [Re: ckiphen]
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 12,065 Travis david Top 10 Poster
Travis david Top 10 Poster Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 12,065 Kendal, Cumbria .UK	Sounds a little like Donald Fagan Carroll. A nice pleasant ballad, well written, sung and priduced Yes good song John We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde

#1171398 - 11/21/20 10:32 AM Re: She loves me she loves me not [Re: ckiphen]
Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 6,260 Douglas Murphy Top 40 Poster
Douglas Murphy Top 40 Poster Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 6,260 Montreal, Quebec, Canada	Great 80's tune. Loved it! Douglas "Is this a practice? They are all practices." John Denver www.soundclick.com/dougmurphy Skype Contact: douglas.murphy8

#1171435 - 11/22/20 08:09 AM Re: She loves me she loves me not [Re: ckiphen]
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ckiphen Top 500 Poster Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 663 - Select One - huntsville, te...	Appreciate the kind words guys. Ckiphen

#1171437 - 11/22/20 09:39 AM Re: She loves me she loves me not [Re: ckiphen]
Joined: Nov 2001 Posts: 1,255 Gerry Top 200 Poster
Gerry Top 200 Poster Joined: Nov 2001 Posts: 1,255 La Linea, Cadiz, Spain	Love it and it reminds me very much of Chicago. On that basis some brass would just set this on fire I think. In either case a lovely listen. Best, Gerry https://soundcloud.com/gerry-cooper-855281238

#1171517 - 11/23/20 01:22 PM Re: She loves me she loves me not [Re: ckiphen]
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ckiphen Top 500 Poster Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 663 - Select One - huntsville, te...	Thanx Ckiphen

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