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#1171229 - 11/17/20 01:50 PM Dissatisfied  
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#1171233 - 11/17/20 04:52 PM Re: Dissatisfied [Re: ckiphen]  
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I like the loose, live feel of this production. I think I like the lyric too, but it was a bit hard to make out in places as the singer got swallowed up in that loose arrangement.

The melody, more particularly the chorus, is close to Hotel California.

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C,

Bring the bass to "center" and forward in the mix a bit. Lot's of potential here with some production tweaks. I can here some Hotel C. as well, but I think you are fine and have altered the melody enough. I'm digging your vibe however!

steady-eddie

#1171248 - 11/18/20 11:43 AM Re: Dissatisfied [Re: ckiphen]  
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Thanks appreciate it.


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#1171266 - 11/18/20 10:56 PM Re: Dissatisfied [Re: ckiphen]  
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Who did this one Carroll, Is that you? smile

#1171268 - 11/19/20 06:28 AM Re: Dissatisfied [Re: ckiphen]  
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Marshall Williams from the old site. Usually does country but this one rocks steady.


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#1171355 - 11/20/20 01:46 PM Re: Dissatisfied [Re: ckiphen]  
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A touch of Dylan perhaps Carroll?
Nice song, good lyrically too.
Best of luck with it
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Thanks Travis. Old one.


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Really like the production of this one. Everything workd for me on on levels. Have fun with it! smile

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#1171474 - 11/22/20 05:23 PM Re: Dissatisfied [Re: ckiphen]  
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Thank you Douglas.


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Took me back to the 60's - except for that reverby snare smile
I really liked this one - love the guitar solo and the spoken bits.
Yeah Dylan fronting the Eagles might be a good comparison.
Love the lyrics BTW

Paul

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Appreciate it


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