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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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CLICKETY CLACK. v I was that kid sitting on a fence always waving at passing trains Engineers got to know me and they'd all wave back again v Grew up, became a railroad man now these are my own iron wheels Heading down the Pacific Line past homesteads and snowcapped hills c Each clickety clack rolling down the track is music to my ears That sweet melody as it picks up steam whistle screaming, hey everyone we're here. Clickety clack rolling down the track make way for the US Mail Fireman tired but a job well done mopse his brow he's sweating pails V Carried rich folks of consequence While freeloaders in boxcars hide Folks relocating to better lives hoping for better luck this time b
Me and my skinny fireman like two jailbirds locked inside Just each others company Passing towns and time
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Last edited by Travis david; 11/26/20 04:49 PM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Gotta love RR songs Travis
Just a coupla sugs to KOS
V1....and they all returned my wave
Chorus....it is mops unless mopse is the Queen's English
V wonky freeloaders in boxcars hide....forced into your time rhyme, but I expect you can find something that rhymes with "while hobos hide in boxcars"
Lastly....it is never hell for you is it??
maybe Me and my skinny fireman like two jailbirds locked inside Just each others company Passing towns and time
It's all I see....
Have a good one
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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Hi John Thanks for your comments and suggestions. I've used your bridge it reads far better than mine thanks I'll get back to the other suggestions soon Cheers Appreciate your help John
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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