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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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by Gary E. Andrews - 04/05/24 01:49 PM
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SOME TIMES A SECOND CHANCE WORKS
TAKE ONE MORE CHANCE © 2020 Mackie Humphries
V1 Pour me another Scotch on the rocks My baby Sue she wants one too We’ve both been stepping outside the box All our friends are thinking we're through.
CH Take one more chance our love is true This time around I’ll be Mr Cool Forget the past and start anew Take one more chance I still love you
V2 Tonight we’ll prove they’ve all been wrong We come in here to drink and dance Been missin' love for way too long We both agree to take one more chance.
CH Take one more chance our love is true This time around I’ll be Mr Cool Forget the past and start anew Take one more chance I still love you Take one more chance I still love you
SOLO BR I know Sue wants the things I do I’ll promise her that I’ll be true Take one more chance...I still love you CH Take one more chance our love is true This time around I’ll be Mr Cool Forget the past and start anew Take one more chance I still love you Take one more chance I still love you
Mackie
Last edited by Mackie H.; 10/20/20 05:13 PM.
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Hi Mackie, Looks like you may have a goodun in the works. I think I would either add one more verse, or put the first chorus in between the verses and add another chorus in. Just my thoughts, KOS.
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John
Thanks for your input
I just put the CH between V1 and V2
I appreciate your help
Mackie
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Hi M, I like this as well, but it sings to the audience in the verses and to her in the chorus,I'd try and keep it directed to her. all the best,john
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John
This one is still in the works--I'll re-focus the verses using your thoughts--Most of my lyrics need a little help!
Thanks for your insight.
I listened to several of your songs on sound click--Lots of ideas in your music--I really like The Pawn Shop Blues
I'm Scotch-Irish with Cherokee thrown in!
Write on!
Mackie
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