Here's a little Halloween tune for 2020 - the year when almost any visitor would be welcome! I had a lot of fun with this one and even made my first music video.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aM-xgE7H6B8

Make Me A Zombie

Monsters are out tonight
But I'm not even afraid
'Cuz something in my head it ain't right
And I'm looking for some kind of change

Make me a zombie
Come on over and infect me
'Cuz I'm really kinda bored
And I'm hoping you will find me and connect me

The night is crawling through my window
And the darkness creeps upon my sheets
I'm so tired of all this living
And I'm hoping you will give me some relief

Make me a vampire
Come on in and bite me slowly
'Cuz I'm dying for a change
Even if it's something that's a bit unholy

Tonight the moon is like a flashlight
That is shining on my weary little life
I'm walking in the woods I'm all alone now
Hoping you will come and find me in the night

Make me a werewolf
Scratch my hand and bite my back now
'Cuz I'm howlin' like loon
And it's time to set your angle of attack now

Make me a vampire
Come on in and bite me slowly
'Cuz I'm dying for a change
Even if it's something that's a bit unholy

Make me a zombie
Come on over and infect me
'Cuz I'm really kinda bored
And I'm hoping you will find me and connect me

Make me a zombie...

I enjoyed the video, revisiting all the horrors of the old days, back when it was 'The' Vampire, 'The' Werewolf, when it was just one 'Night' of the Living Dead. That was before the vampires and werewolves had a gang, and none of them were anybody's 'boyfriend', and it became every frickin' day of the living dead. LOL

The vocalization of the Lyric doesn't come through on some words, Lines.
I always suggest trying to eliminate some of the 'Connector' words, 'But', 'And', and 'Cuz' to see if you can make the Rhythm still work, and unclutter the Lines in the mouth of the singer. That nanosecond of 'breathing' room and 'enunciation' space can make a difference in the rushed words, enabling the singer to 'send' with a more optimal opportunity to assure the listener can 'receive' the words. A missed word can wreck a Line, and a missed Line can wreck a Stanza, wrecking the Song.
The production is good. Bass seemed a little at odds in places.
You get it done in 3:02.
How long is that Introductory Movement? 10 seconds percussion, 12 sec. instrumentation.
Organ adds interest at 1:25 or so. Introducing new sounds about every 20 seconds can renew listener interest. I hear some special effects there toward the end.
Three listens. It's growing on me...like...like...a virus...making me a....Zombie! LOL
Keep exploring. Good Halloween 'era' product.

Well written and well done.

The singer's voice is great. It has the feeling of Bad Blood!

Very, very good!

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Have fun!

This was obviously a lot of fun lol! Happy Halloween

Well, that was fun! And Robots in the Rain is a great name for a band.

Thanks Gary,

Yup, it was a bit of work getting in those words. Good suggestion to try to tighten it up a bit.

JAPOV,

yes this was a ton of fun to do. And unlike my other songs, I actually had a deadline on this one :-)

Gavin,

thanks. Glad you like the name. I do robotics engineering in my day job and I thought of it while actually testing robots in the rain one day.

..ant