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Hi All, My Muse kept me awake again!
The Way it Should Be
I wake up each morning With you close to me I get so excited Feeling you breathe I pull you closer My hand's on your hip Next thing I know You're kissing my lips
That's the way-------------} Chorus It should be Each time is so new A sweet mystery Every beginning Feels like the first My hearts beats so fast I think it could burst
I'll never get bored Of being with you You feel the same I know that you do I tell by your touch Your reaction to mine It only gets better Like a fine wine
That's the way-------------} Chorus It should be Each time is so new A sweet mystery Every beginning Feels like the first My hearts beats so fast I think it could burst
Next thing I know--------} Bridge I'm waking again You're touching my hip Can't wait to begin
That's the way-------------} Chorus It should be Each time is so new A sweet mystery Every beginning Feels like the first My hearts beats so fast I think it could burst
That's the way It should be
Copyright 10/2020 John W Selleck
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Very fine love song. Not much to add to this.
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Very fine love song. Not much to add to this. Thanks for the read and the kind words. Love songs are my write of choice. I also like writing sexy songs without 4 letter words.
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Lovely song, John. Only change I would make would be the word "burst" because in my mind it just doesn't sing well. Maybe:
Every beginning Feels like we're winning My heart beats so fast Wish this moment would last Forever
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