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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Hi All, Fresh ink, a rainy day love song!
Melancholy Moments
The rain is falling silently Gently through the day It turns the world outside Into a misty gray Shadows passing through I wonder where they go Disappearing quickly Will I ever know
Melancholy moments--------} Chorus That is all they are Losing thoughts in time Like staring at the stars Melancholy moments Never make me blue They give me time for Daydreaming of you
I can watch for hours Through the windowpane Reliving memories Gazing at the rain Waiting for a glimpse Just one sight of you Will make my day My heart beat faster too
Melancholy moments--------} Chorus That is all they are Losing thoughts in time Like staring at the stars Melancholy moments Never make me blue They give me time for Daydreaming of you
I see your shadow outside--] Bridge Carrying your bag I'm so very happy My tail begins to wag This is a love song true especially for you
Instrumental Break
Melancholy moments--------} Chorus That is all they are Losing thoughts in time Like staring at the stars Melancholy moments Never make me blue They give me time for Daydreaming of you
This is a love song true Especially for you
Copyright 9/2020 John W Selleck BMI
Last edited by John W. Selleck; 09/21/20 02:15 AM.
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Great write here, not too much to add. Memories of nights when you would put on some music, light the candles,--you got this.
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Great write here, not too much to add. Memories of nights when you would put on some music, light the candles,--you got this. Thank you sir, for the read and compliments. How did you like the twist in the bridge?
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This is very good. I like it. I like the tail wag line, it completly shifts the story. Nice.
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This is very good. I like it. I like the tail wag line, it completly shifts the story. Nice. Thanks so very much. I may change the end of the bridge a little to add puppy love in. This can easily be made to sing for your cat as well. "And I begin to purr!"
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