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I've been having problems connecting with the site, had to register again, hopefully this works,
My One And Only One.
If I searched the whole wide world Until my life was through I would never find a girl As beautiful as you, And if I danced with a princess In a palace fine and grand When the music ended I would reach for your hand.
ch Your love is the only love I depend upon To me you will always be My one and only one.
If I held the key to paradise Where rapture fills each day Without your affection I’d throw that key away, And if I could walk on water Over oceans I might stride But I’d go nowhere Without you by my side.
ch Your love is the only love I depend upon To me you will always be My one and only one
bridge Your kiss is the only kiss I dream about Your touch is the only touch I can’t live without, Your eyes are the only eyes I crave to see Your smile is the only smile That glows within me.
ch Your love is the only love I depend upon To me you will always be My one and only one
To me you will always be My one and only one
Last edited by johnparagreen; 09/17/20 03:38 PM.
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This is a really nice lyric, John. Simple, from the heart, with some really nice lines. I particularly like these, they just seem to roll off the tongue. And if I could walk on water Over oceans I might stride But I’d go nowhere Without you by my side.
The only bit I'm not so keen on is this. If I held the key to paradise Where skies are never grey
The second line feels kind of blah, just a filler. Maybe you could come up with something a bit more imaginative there.
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Hi John P, This is very nice lyric. You can have an easy fix for "Skies are never grey" with "Where palm trees always sway". Just my thoughts, KOS. Good luck with it!
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Thanks Gavin, I totally agree about that line, I mulled over it and hit a brick wall, but I will change it to something more visual, thanks John, I'll keep your suggestion in mind, all the best guys john.
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John
Nice Love Story
Mackie
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This one reminds me of the love my parents had for each other; something much harder to find in this day and age. In my own case too much restlessness, usually on my part but on one occasion on the other's, kept me from finding that kind of a love. It's good to be able to create a piece such as this, whether or not it came from own experience.
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Thanks for dropping by Mackie,pleased you like it Thanks beech, yeah I guess being married for 46 years kinda shows, all the best,john
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