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#1168928 - 09/09/20 05:38 PM My One And Only One  
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I've been having problems connecting with the site, had to register again, hopefully this works,

My One And Only One.

If I searched the whole wide world
Until my life was through
I would never find a girl
As beautiful as you,
And if I danced with a princess
In a palace fine and grand
When the music ended
I would reach for your hand.

ch
Your love is the only love
I depend upon
To me you will always be
My one and only one.

If I held the key to paradise
Where rapture fills each day
Without your affection
Id throw that key away,
And if I could walk on water
Over oceans I might stride
But Id go nowhere
Without you by my side.

ch
Your love is the only love
I depend upon
To me you will always be
My one and only one

bridge
Your kiss is the only kiss
I dream about
Your touch is the only touch
I cant live without,
Your eyes are the only eyes
I crave to see
Your smile is the only smile
That glows within me.

ch
Your love is the only love
I depend upon
To me you will always be
My one and only one

To me you will always be
My one and only one

Last edited by johnparagreen; 09/17/20 03:38 PM.

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#1168934 - 09/09/20 07:54 PM Re: My One And Only One [Re: johnparagreen]  
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This is a really nice lyric, John. Simple, from the heart, with some really nice lines. I particularly like these, they just seem to roll off the tongue.
And if I could walk on water
Over oceans I might stride
But Id go nowhere
Without you by my side.

The only bit I'm not so keen on is this.
If I held the key to paradise
Where skies are never grey

The second line feels kind of blah, just a filler. Maybe you could come up with something a bit more imaginative there.

#1168943 - 09/10/20 01:18 AM Re: My One And Only One [Re: johnparagreen]  
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Hi John P,
This is very nice lyric. You can have an easy fix for "Skies are never grey" with "Where palm trees always sway". Just my thoughts, KOS. Good luck with it!


Have a goodun,

John W. Selleck BMI Songwriter
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#1168946 - 09/10/20 05:24 AM Re: My One And Only One [Re: johnparagreen]  
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Thanks Gavin, I totally agree about that line, I mulled over it and hit a brick wall, but I will change it to something more visual,
thanks John, I'll keep your suggestion in mind,
all the best guys
john.


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#1168979 - 09/10/20 06:41 PM Re: My One And Only One [Re: johnparagreen]  
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Nice Love Story

Mackie

#1169069 - 09/13/20 03:33 PM Re: My One And Only One [Re: johnparagreen]  
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This one reminds me of the love my parents had for each other; something much harder to find in this day and age. In my own case too much restlessness, usually on my part but on one occasion on the other's, kept me from finding that kind of a love. It's good to be able to create a piece such as this, whether or not it came from own experience.

#1169300 - 09/17/20 03:42 PM Re: My One And Only One [Re: johnparagreen]  
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Thanks for dropping by Mackie,pleased you like it
Thanks beech, yeah I guess being married for 46 years kinda shows,
all the best,john


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