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Leafs
by Gary E. Andrews - 03/04/24 12:47 PM
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BREATHING, GROWING.
V I have walked the shores of paradise through valley's scented with sweet jasmine Seen wonderous things through my eyes rejoiced in the melody cardinal's sing V When I finally leave this world behind and to loved ones I'll say goodbye Could be so, that this soul of mine reaches barren land, without blue skies C Breathing, growing meandering flowing Please don't take this away from me When my times comes just knowing all those dreams I'd stopped sowing Would return for all eternity
V I've ambled over Lakeland fells climbed the top of its highest peak on the wind heard echoes of ancient bells viewed sights so breathtaking its hard to speak C Breathing, growing meandering flowing Please don't take this away from me When my times comes just knowing all those dreams I'd stopped sowing Would return for all eternity
Last edited by Travis david; 08/05/20 09:10 AM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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Hi John, Painting some very nice word pictures here. A couple of tiny suggestions, KOS: reaches barren land, without a clear blue sky On the wind, echoes of ancient bells
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Cheers John, thanks for your help and suggestions which have been gratefully used Regards John
Last edited by Travis david; 08/04/20 08:06 AM.
We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
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