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#1167103 - 07/29/20 08:39 AM The girl that got away  
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https://soundcloud.com/carroll-kiphen/the-girl-that-got-away-2

Chris Wood/ Music and vocals ; Carroll kiphen/ Lyrics
he girl who got away

Verse
She had long honey colored hair
Had eyes like a summer sky.
Her kiss was as delicious as
A warm slice of cherry pie.
We would take walks beside sea
Leaving footprints in the sand.
We were blind to the fact that fate
Had already made her plans.
Chorus
Itís been quite a good life.
Canít say I can complain.
But sometimes I still miss
The girl that got away.
The girl that got away.
The girl that got away.
Verse
Itís hard to go from A to Z
Without ever changing lanes.
Iím not the man I was back then
And Iím sure sheís not the same.
What about my life and my wife,
All the things I hold so dear?
If she hadnít gotten away
I wouldnít have now and here.
Chorus
Itís been quite a good life.
Canít say I can complain.
But sometimes I still miss
The girl that got away.
The girl that got away.
The girl that got away.
Verse
Sheís on my mind from time to time
And I hope she thinks of me.
What we had we will always have
But it wasnít meant to be.
Thereís still a place inside my heart
Where my love for her remains
But Iíd never trade what Iíve got
For the girl that got away.
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The girl that got away.
The girl that got away.

Last edited by ckiphen; 07/29/20 08:40 AM.

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#1167107 - 07/29/20 10:35 AM Re: The girl that got away [Re: ckiphen]  
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Very nice collaboration, Kiph and Chris:

Enjoyed my listen and wish you success with "The Girl That Got Away." The title alone is a great "hook" but the artistry Chris brings to your lyric is darn near perfect.

Thanks for sharing, ----Dave

#1167109 - 07/29/20 01:32 PM Re: The girl that got away [Re: ckiphen]  
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Appreciate it but just doing it for fun.


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#1167138 - 07/29/20 11:46 PM Re: The girl that got away [Re: ckiphen]  
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Carroll (and Chris),

You gents are on a roll! Also quite contemporary, with another great vocal by Chris. Reminds me of a Mat Kearny song, with a hint of Ed Sheeran. But Chris has his own sound, which makes this stand out.

If I were to offer a suggestion for you to consider, it would be this: Running at plus 4:20, given sound, tempo and song structure, I think it may benefit from a change-up somewhere along the line . . . take it up just a notch at some point to keep the listener on edge. One idea might be going near acapella at some point, with minimal music backing and extra harmony? Chrisís vocals could certainly pull it off. Just an idea, and one guyís very, very nitty and subjective suggestion. Itís quite excellent as is.

Enjoyed it very much!

Deej

#1167158 - 07/30/20 12:51 PM Re: The girl that got away [Re: ckiphen]  
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Right now we're just having fun. Not worried about finished cuts at this time. 5 songs in five days! In digging it while it lasts. You re still welcome to use my lyrics as well.


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