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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Just having fun with this. i'm stuck. Can't think of a chorus. I like my first verse but after that it needs help. Changes welcomed.
Black Widow Spider Verse Her web is bejeweled with diamonds of dew. Her kiss is the kiss of death. Her heart is embittered by failures at love. God knows what’s brought her to this. Pre chorus Don’t cry any tears for the widow. She murdered her lover man. Don’t come if she asks you for dinner. She’ll drink your blood if she can. Chorus ? Black widow spider Verse She’s learned to bedazzle to capture her men. She weaves while they dream their dreams. Their souls are enraptured, they’re tangled in love They’re none to wise to her scheme. Pre chorus Chorus
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Hi C, I'll have a go, all the best.john
Her web is bejeweled with diamonds of dew. But death resides in her kiss Her heart is embittered by failures at love. God knows what’s brought her to this.
Pre chorus Don’t shed a tear for the widow. Don't offer her your hand Refuse if she asks you for dinner. Run as fast as you can.
Chorus Black widow spider Temptress behind a veil She'll drink your blood As you scream and wail, Her succulent lips Are sweeter than cider But take care and beware Of the black widow spider.
She’s learned to dazzle to capture a male. She weaves thrills into his dreams Her skill is knowing the weakness of love And concealing her wicked schemes.
pre chorus Don't give your heart to the widow Don't accept her advances Turn your head the other way To her amorous dances
Chorus Black widow spider Temptress behind a veil She'll drink your blood As you scream and wail, Her succulent lips Are sweeter than cider But take care and beware Of the black widow spider.
Oh take care and beware Of the black widow spider.
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Much better appreciate it
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