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#1164910 - 06/01/20 01:28 PM Everybody's blood is red  
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- Select One - houston, texas...
Everybody’s blood is Red
Verse
For all the progress we have made
There’s much too still address.
Despite the changes we have made
The world is still a mess.
Pre chorus
Race is still an issue.
Hate is on the rise.
Buildings are burning
Innocent still die.
Chorus
Stop the madness, stop the madness.
Everybody’s blood is red.
Everybody’s blood is red.
Verse
Get with the program climb on board.
Let’s change what needs changing.
Admit that we all have our faults.
Let’s stop all this blaming.
Pre chorus
Hate is still a disease,
It’s our common foe.
Brotherhoods still our dream.
We still hope it grow.
Chorus
Stop the madness, stop the madness.
Everybody’s blood is red.
Everybody’s blood is red.
Bridge
If you keep picking at a scab
The wound will never heal.
Beneath the skin we’re all the same.
We breath, we hurt, we feel.
Verse
For all the progress we have made
There’s much too still address.
Despite the changes we have made
The world is still a mess.
Outro
For every good man there’s a mad man.
Pity they get the press.
Maybe the medias the problem
That we should address.

#1164913 - 06/01/20 02:45 PM Re: Everybody's blood is red [Re: ckiphen]  
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This has some good lines in it CK.

Maybe "scab" isn't such an attractive song word and could be a turn off.
"Picking at it" would suffice.

Perhaps better not to blame the media at the outro and leave it at:

"For every good man there’s a mad man.
Pity they get the press. The mad man gets the press".

Vic


It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#1164927 - 06/02/20 01:51 PM Re: Everybody's blood is red [Re: ckiphen]  
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- Select One - houston, texas...
Thanks ill edit a bit later.

#1164976 - 06/03/20 05:28 PM Re: Everybody's blood is red [Re: ckiphen]  
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Hi, I like the hook, I always struggle to hear a song with your lyrics though,I think if work on structure and presentation a lot of your lyrics would shine better, reading lyrics to the songs you like is a good start, layout is important if you wish to attract a musician to make the song, here you end on a bridge and an outro, which is very unusual (to me) with a good title/hook it is wiser to leave that sticking in the listeners head,
overall this lyric sounds too much like a rant to me, you have some good lines as Vic said, but scab is a turn off and
we still hope it grow
Is a car crash,
I'd like to see a rhyme in the chorus,that connects the colour theme,
anyway here endeth my rant, cept to say I'm an old foggie, so if it's intended as a rap song feel free to tell me I don't know what I'm talking about.
all the best,john.


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