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#1162542 - 03/29/20 07:54 PM Shadows at the Wall  
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Hey All,

I'm revising some old tunes. This one was done as a JPF challenge by Mr Mark Kaufman . I never finished it. It's a synopsis and demo only. Please excuse the vocal line at the end. I'm not a vocalist. smile Is it worth continuing with ?

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=9223229

cheers, niteshift

#1162544 - 03/29/20 08:00 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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Hey there nightshift....a great tune, man. So much to like here. The music has a lot to work with, the melody and lyric is good. I say yes.......keep going. And have fun!
Good, good stuff!
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#1162545 - 03/29/20 09:04 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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This is too good to leave alone, Geoff:

I don't know exactly how your co-writers feel but, if it were mine, it would be the object of my attention until it's reached all the full potential that can be achieved. Enjoyed it. Look forward to hearing the finished product... or experiments along the way. Take your time... it will swarm over you all by itself when the time is ripe.

Best wishes and good luck, ----Dave

#1162636 - 04/01/20 06:19 AM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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Hey Tom,

Thanks for the encouragement bud. smile

Hey Dave, I'll keep plugging away. smile

cheers, niteshift

#1162884 - 04/08/20 05:05 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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Yes Nightshift, I'll say take your time, I think the finished product it is going to sound well. For now I enjoy the listen Good song.

@Irwin

#1162920 - 04/09/20 02:02 AM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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niteshift,

Love the lyrics on this tune . . . underscored by some great chord changes . . . Sooooo, absolutely—finish this one. Gonna be a good one!! And here’s how I know:

I didn’t read your note that it was unfinished before listening to it. So there I am enjoying the tune and it stops suddenly. I had flashbacks to the “Sopranos” finale when my screen went back. Don’t leave me hanging like David Chase did!

I’ll look forward to hearing it.

All my best,

Deej

#1162963 - 04/09/20 07:36 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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It's too damn good to desert it now IMHO.
Love the chord progressions and the pre-chorus especially.
And of course the tinkly bits on the keys smile
Needs a big soulful lead guitar solo.
First time I've heard your stuff - won't be the last smile

Paul

#1162985 - 04/10/20 09:53 AM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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I agree with everyone else. Definitely worth finishing. Hope we get to hear the finished article!

#1163056 - 04/11/20 03:52 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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Nite,

Definitely song has potential and worth pursuing.

steady-eddie

#1163187 - 04/14/20 01:46 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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Hey Irwin,

Thanks for your comment bud smile

Hi Dj, I will take the link to the Sopranos with pride. smile

Cheers Paul, yes will definitely include the big guitar solo.

Hey Gavin, thanks for the listen, and yes, I hope I can finish it.

Hey Eddie, I saw your previous post and would be most interested in your suggestions. Just PM me. smile

cheers, niteshift

#1163190 - 04/14/20 02:47 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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No doubt about it my friend most certainly worth continuing and yes the guitar solo is obligatory.

and we throw shadows at the wall
Not knowing where the're going to fall

Just those two lines make it worth continuing with apart from everything else.

Best,

Gerry

#1163207 - 04/15/20 04:34 AM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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Thanks Gerry, your comments are most encouraging. smile

cheers, niteshift

#1163503 - 04/21/20 07:32 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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Nite,

Did not want that to stop, so give us more!! Great stuff!

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#1163556 - 04/22/20 05:18 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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Hey Tams,

Thank you my friend. Your encouragement is most appreciated. smile

cheers, niteshift

#1163973 - 05/03/20 11:24 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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The chorus is very strong. Definitely worthwhile trying to finish it.

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#1163986 - 05/04/20 03:37 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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Finish it. Definately worth it.

Dave

#1163988 - 05/04/20 05:49 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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Hey, I call copyright infringement I worked with that same track lol.

https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=13860785

#1164007 - 05/05/20 02:37 PM Re: Shadows at the Wall [Re: niteshift]  
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Hey Fd,

Haha ! Yes, it was a JPF challenge. I'm sure there are many variations. Good for the original artist. They may make a few cents in royalties. smile

cheers, niteshift


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