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#1162483 - 03/28/20 10:40 AM TOO PERDY TO IGNORE  
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I haven't written a new song in quite some time. A Corona Virus lay-off has given me some time do to things that I didn't have before. This is a boogie tune with a 96 bpm pace.

TOO PERDY TO IGNORE

You’re driving by in your sports car – like ev’ryone should know who you are.

It’s plain to see that you’re well kept – to be sure.

And you are just too perdy to ignore.


You step on out in your sexy dress – and all your moves are meant to impress.

You’re on the hunt for something fast – nothing more.

And you are just too perdy to ignore.


You could be a scammer, a goldigger, or a sugardaddy’s cheating paramour.

You flash your flirting eyes at me.

Come on – give me a clue, which one will you be?


My mind is telling me:” Don’t you dare.” My heart is telling me:”I don’t care.”

I’ve got in trouble with your type before.

But you are just too perdy to ignore.


© by David Burtner AKA Summeoyo

Last edited by summeoyo; 03/28/20 02:05 PM. Reason: The chord change positions were moved after the intial post.
#1162747 - 04/05/20 01:59 PM Re: TOO PERDY TO IGNORE [Re: summeoyo]  
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I'm looking for some specific feedback. Either go to:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POkl6FLKc3M

or the music video forum.

#1162750 - 04/05/20 03:23 PM Re: TOO PERDY TO IGNORE [Re: summeoyo]  
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From what I can hear of the lyric it sounds fine to me.
The music overrides it.
The female harmony may lift it.
Vic

Last edited by Vicarn; 04/05/20 03:24 PM.

It's never too late? Yes it is, so do it now.

If, given time, a monkey can write the complete works of Shakespeare maybe there's hope for me.

http://store.cdbaby.com/cd/vicarnold2

http://www.soundclick.com/vicarnold

http://soundcloud.com/vic-arnold

#1162754 - 04/05/20 09:06 PM Re: TOO PERDY TO IGNORE [Re: summeoyo]  
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Thanks for the response. I'm not really concerned about sound levels with the video as it was posted only to get some feedback as to whether the song is better with the female harmony reply on the last verse or not. Does it add anything to my stage persona? Would the song be better with or without it? It would be hard to answer those questions just by looking at the lyrics here on the lyric forum. You'd really need to listen to the video to get the possible advantages of adding the reply that's being considered.

Summeoyo


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