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#1162182 - 03/13/20 02:22 AM JUST LIKE LOVE  
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Just like love
V
Angels don't fall from heaven
When they have wings to fly
Those colours in the rainbow
aren't painted by some guy
C
Somethings are meant to be
Somethings come naturally
Just like love
Just like love
V
Sunshine and showers grow flowers
Wish love grew that way
From the shore the tide flows
but it'll return the same day

Chorus

B. ( The bridge is different on the recording, this was the initial version)
You can see love
You can feel love
And love can set you free

V
Nobody tells the wind to blow
You walk before you run
One thing I know for sure
lonesome 'til you find someone
Chorus
----------------------------

The second version of the song and work in progress.
The song is a soft jazz soul song composed by myself and Keith Redfern
A full band version is to sung at Zaferellies jazz venue in Lakeland next week.
The vocal will feature a female lead
Cheers
John

Last edited by Travis david; 03/13/20 09:43 AM.

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#1162190 - 03/14/20 12:14 AM Re: JUST LIKE LOVE [Re: Travis david]  
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Travis,

Very nice to hear the complete version of this, having only heard a snippet or two previously. Keith does a really nice job on it. Very different than the prior version; really smooth. Iím partial to that prior version (guess why smirk) . . . but this is superbly done (and if Iím terribly honest, much better than the version you did with that other guy).

Will you get to see it played live? Hope so.

Hope all is well on your side of the pond!

Deej

#1162218 - 03/15/20 09:35 AM Re: JUST LIKE LOVE [Re: Travis david]  
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Feel good song!
Well written and well done.

Have fun.


K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple and Singable
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#1162275 - 03/20/20 04:05 AM Re: JUST LIKE LOVE [Re: Travis david]  
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Hi Travis, Nice song you Have here , very smooth easy listening and very pleasing to the ears.

Nice vocals.

Irwin

#1162352 - 03/23/20 07:58 PM Re: JUST LIKE LOVE [Re: Travis david]  
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Hi Travis and Keith:

Very nice, guys. Enjoyed my listen and I'm hoping this one will generate fans and cash for you. Great vocal, by the way. If you plan to "pitch" the song... you might consider a female demo version? Coving all the bases is never a bad idea if time and money are no problem.

Wishing both of you the best, ----Dave

#1162412 - 03/26/20 10:15 AM Re: JUST LIKE LOVE [Re: Travis david]  
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Hey Travis/Keith,

I didn't hear the other version. I like this vibe & melody. It does remind me of a late 60's pop song. I'm not sure who's producing, but before doing a demo, I think it would benefit you with polishing the production a bit--by panning the main electric guitar a bit away from center one way or another about 40% and maybe reduce volume slightly, as its getting in the way of the lead vox--let lead vox have center. Have the lead guitar solo panned slightly to opposing side of main guitar rhythm. If drums are on one track, you won't be able to adjust or pan individual parts, if separate, cymbals do not need to be so far left of right--they need to feel part of the drum kit, and kick should be more pronounced to give the song more pulse--IMO. Harmonies could be should be panned a bit probably opposite side of electric guitar and eq'd to be more pronounced (if you do pan the guitar it a bit). Think 3D with your mix balance which will empower these really good vocals!

Nice write fellas, but it could really be really be enhanced IMO. Sweet song!

steady-eddie


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