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#1160514 - 01/12/20 01:39 AM GATOR IN THE SWAMP(Rewrite with new verse)  
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GATOR IN THE SWAMP
V
She was never really mine
It was just my turn
Think it's all going fine
but in time I learned
You can't reason with a gator
When your heads in its mouth
So I gave up trying
packed and headed out

C
There's a gator in the swamp
get eaten or jump?
Don't need a menu
got a pulse she'll have you
There's a gatar in the swamp
Get eaten or jump
V
The only hand in my pocket
is my very own
Alone but don't knock it
No blonde hairs on my comb
No tiptoes on the stairs
When she Comes sneaking in
She'll find the bed bare
but soon fill it again
B
Goodbye to you hoo
I said, goodbye to

Music

C

V
There's a waitress in the diner
she works real hard
She put that A H behind her
like some fun but too tired
Here's my proposition
got a match? Lets start a fire
Down those dirty dishes
let's burn some miles with my tyres

B2
Goodbye to you hoo
I said, goodbye to you


C

Sent from my Huawei phone

------------------------------------

GATOR in the Swamp
V
She was never really mine
It was just my turn
Think it's all going fine
but in time I learned
You can't reason with a gator
When your heads in its mouth
So I gave up trying
packed and moved on out

C
There's a gator in the swamp
get eaten or jump?
Don't need a menu
got a pulse she'll have you
There's a gator in the swamp
Get eaten or jump
V
The only hand in my pocket
is my very own
Alone but don't knock it
No blonde hairs on my comb
No tiptoes on the stairs
When she Comes sneaking in
She'll find the bed bare
but soon fill it again
B
Goodbye to you hoo
I said, goodbye to you

Music

C

Last edited by Travis david; 01/12/20 06:23 AM.

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#1160529 - 01/12/20 06:02 PM Re: GATAR IN THE SWAMP(COUNTRY ROCK) [Re: Travis david]  
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NJ
Hi John,
I like this a lot, only a couple of small suggestions, one "Gator" and two I would change jump to run. KOS, good luck with it.


Have a goodun,

John W. Selleck BMI Songwriter
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#1161059 - 01/27/20 09:07 AM Re: GATAR IN THE SWAMP(COUNTRY ROCK) [Re: Travis david]  
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Thanks John for the read Vic and I have this lyric with adaptions as our next offering collab 40? So manylol
John

Last edited by Travis david; 01/27/20 11:21 AM.

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