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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Here is one of my songs. Rough demo: My voice + ukulele https://www.soundclick.com/music/songInfo.cfm?songID=13948932OLD FASHION SONG_______________________________________________ © Words and music: Guy E. Trépanier, 2019. All rights reserved: Guy E. Trépanier. If you like my songs, please donate: https://www.paypal.me/guyetrepIntro: 8 bars (key of A) Come closer to me My sweet little bee Please, lend me your hand I won't be too bland So let me tell you I'll take care of you I promise I'll do I'll do the best I can do I wanna give you This old fashion song I wrote it for you So come and sing along This old fashion song... ... ... You got a true skill To give me some thrill You can take the time To share a pastime So let me tell you I'll take care of you I promise I'll do I'll do the best I can do I wanna give you This old fashion song I wrote it for you So come and sing along This old fashion song... ... ... Baby you drive me crazy You're the one I'm thinking of I wanna make you happy I wanna show you my love I wanna give you This old fashion song I wrote it for you So come and sing along This old fashion song ... ... This old fashion song Guy E. Trepanier #371 Melody: feb 2019. Lyrics: feb 2019.
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Hey Guy, The song itself, and the lyrics itself work fine. What is not working here ( as an island boy ) are the passion in the vocal and in the playing of the uke. I could see this played around the kava table, and be very singable. What falls down is ti's delivery. Give it some passion both in the playing and vocal delivery. cheers, niteshift
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NITESHIFT!! Lol... You should probably think again... I'll bet our ol'boy Guy has the ladies lining up in Quebec
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I dont think the problem is passion, He reminds me of Don Ho, or even Dare I say Elvis? Love me Tender,,,,, its right in that pocket, obviously nobody can be Elvis.
Simple songs, I wouldnt think somebody would record it, but you actually sound good and probably the strongest part is your voice.
if it were me I would try to expand on some of your Ideas Guy. You have probably hundreds of songs in this style.
You can bring something new to it.
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 01/21/20 06:55 PM.
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