Still getting over you ©2019

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A memory Lapse about of amnesia
A quiet place where you don’t exist
With no reminders That I still need you
A solitude Where you’re never missed

You’re everywhere I go, there’s no place to hide
There’s no getting over you believe me I’ve tried
I know that you’ve moved on
found someone new
But everywhere I go
Still getting over you

I lie to myself try to believe
I’m O K there’s nothing to forget
I’m out with friends Its Obvious
I’m still Broken and not over you yet

You’re everywhere I go, there’s no place to hide
There’s no getting over you believe me I’ve tried
I know that you’ve moved on
found someone new
But everywhere I go
Still getting over you

(Blues lead)

I know that you’ve moved on
And found someone new
But everywhere I go
Still getting over you
In a car at the house at the club
Still getting over you
On a date with some friends I’m missing us
Still getting over you
Guess ill always be
Still getting over you

I like this song and lyric, I think you trimmed off all the fat [so to speak] in the lyric. I like that in writing.
in the first chorus, "Still getting over you, was not very pronounced to me. I thought it should have
hit me like a train wreck....lol good song and lyric, good vocals.

I Like this very much. sad songs touch the heart, especially with people that have had theirs broken more than a few times. But that said, nothing ventured nothing gained. Gee, I wrote my self another hook, and just wrote it now. If you want to see, visit lyric 3. Good luck with yours.

Excellent sound, enjoyed the listen. Thanks for sharing
John

Thank you for the feed back
Anthony

Hi Anthony
I enjoyed listening to this one.
Some lovely guitar work here and the vox are solid.
There are a few pitchy spots (easily fixed) but everything fits nicely together.
I think you missed the word "still" a couple of times - and I felt it was important to the hook so thought I'd mention it.
Anyway a nice sad song for sure
Paul

Anthony,

Nice tune. You've gotten some good suggestions above; good avenues for tweaking. I'd like that vocal to sit in the mix just a little bit more; maybe a tad warmer on the mix. But on the whole, this really hangs together and has a nice feel. Good stuff!

Regards,

Deej

Thank you all for your great feed back

Anthony

Hi enjoyed this song very much..so happy I checked in tonight and got to hear this one..thanks for sharing it..

glyn