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#1159008 - 11/28/19 02:04 PM Still getting over you  
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Still getting over you ©2019

https://soundclick.com/r/s8b291

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A memory Lapse about of amnesia
A quiet place where you donít exist
With no reminders That I still need you
A solitude Where youíre never missed

Youíre everywhere I go, thereís no place to hide
Thereís no getting over you believe me Iíve tried
I know that youíve moved on
found someone new
But everywhere I go
Still getting over you

I lie to myself try to believe
Iím O K thereís nothing to forget
Iím out with friends Its Obvious
Iím still Broken and not over you yet

Youíre everywhere I go, thereís no place to hide
Thereís no getting over you believe me Iíve tried
I know that youíve moved on
found someone new
But everywhere I go
Still getting over you

(Blues lead)

I know that youíve moved on
And found someone new
But everywhere I go
Still getting over you
In a car at the house at the club
Still getting over you
On a date with some friends Iím missing us
Still getting over you
Guess ill always be
Still getting over you

Last edited by the_lyricwriter; 12/01/19 12:44 PM.
#1159014 - 11/28/19 03:31 PM Re: Still getting over you [Re: the_lyricwriter]  
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south of the mason,dixon line
I like this song and lyric, I think you trimmed off all the fat [so to speak] in the lyric. I like that in writing.
in the first chorus, "Still getting over you, was not very pronounced to me. I thought it should have
hit me like a train wreck....lol good song and lyric, good vocals.


"Some have a need to chisel in stone, All have a need to be heard" Vincent
#1159015 - 11/28/19 06:01 PM Re: Still getting over you [Re: the_lyricwriter]  
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I Like this very much. sad songs touch the heart, especially with people that have had theirs broken more than a few times. But that said, nothing ventured nothing gained. Gee, I wrote my self another hook, and just wrote it now. If you want to see, visit lyric 3. Good luck with yours.

#1159042 - 11/30/19 03:49 AM Re: Still getting over you [Re: the_lyricwriter]  
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Excellent sound, enjoyed the listen. Thanks for sharing
John


We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars. Oscar Wilde
#1159094 - 12/01/19 11:00 AM Re: Still getting over you [Re: the_lyricwriter]  
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Thank you for the feed back
Anthony

#1159098 - 12/01/19 03:13 PM Re: Still getting over you [Re: the_lyricwriter]  
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Hi Anthony
I enjoyed listening to this one.
Some lovely guitar work here and the vox are solid.
There are a few pitchy spots (easily fixed) but everything fits nicely together.
I think you missed the word "still" a couple of times - and I felt it was important to the hook so thought I'd mention it.
Anyway a nice sad song for sure smile
Paul

#1159208 - 12/04/19 03:29 AM Re: Still getting over you [Re: the_lyricwriter]  
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Anthony,

Nice tune. You've gotten some good suggestions above; good avenues for tweaking. I'd like that vocal to sit in the mix just a little bit more; maybe a tad warmer on the mix. But on the whole, this really hangs together and has a nice feel. Good stuff!

Regards,

Deej

#1159375 - 12/06/19 09:42 PM Re: Still getting over you [Re: Deej56]  
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Thank you all for your great feed back

Anthony

#1159427 - 12/09/19 03:20 AM Re: Still getting over you [Re: the_lyricwriter]  
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Hi enjoyed this song very much..so happy I checked in tonight and got to hear this one..thanks for sharing it..

glyn


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