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#1158450 - 11/06/19 06:23 PM The Same Sun Shines On Us All  
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This is a kind of anthem idea for the European Union. For now, it doesn't really have anything. They play Beethoven's Ode To Joy sometimes. Beethoven is pretty good, but it's not exactly stirring stuff. Maybe if people could get behind the European idea with their hearts as well as their brains, things would be less of a mess. Not really interested in starting an argument about Brexit, etc. It avoids political points and focuses on the positives. Just looking for suggestions on the song, which is still a work in progress.

https://soundcloud.com/themysteriousbeings/the-same-sun-shines-on-us-all/s-sDV6z

The last verse is supposed to have young people from various countries singing in their language. I'm just filling in until I find them. I don't actually know any Danish beyond the word for beer, so that last one is probably hopelessly mangled. I'd really like to have a whole choir on the last chorus, but that might be asking a bit much smile


THE SAME SUN SHINES ON US ALL
(Words & Music by Gavin Sinclair)

From the wild northern ocean
To the bright southern sea
Thereís a land that was given
To you and to me
A dream that was born
In the ashes of war
Itís a dream that is worth
Fighting for

In the bright brilliant blue of the skies over Spain
Through Scotlandís soft mists and sweet summer rain
Over fields where those young men were slain - not in vain
The same sun shines on us all

From the wild northern ocean
To the bright southern sea
Thereís a land that was given
To you and to me
A dream that was born
In the ashes of war
Itís a dream that is worth
Fighting for

The cathedrals they built, the fields that they tilled
Musicians and poets, the souls that they filled
Theirs is the spirit that lives in us still
The same sun shines on us all

From the wild northern ocean
To the bright southern sea
Thereís a land that was given
To you and to me
A dream that was born
In the ashes of war
Itís a dream that is worth
Fighting for

This is our dream, Dies ist unser Traum
Cíest notre rÍve, Dit is onze droom
Questo Ť il nostro sogno, Dette er vores drÝm
The same sun shines on us all.

#1158451 - 11/06/19 08:38 PM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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Hi Gavin:

As anthems go... this one works well. You touched all the right spots from a EU perspective. I don't have a "dog in the fight" but I hope maybe this one will get you some attention "over there" and hopefully, put a little change in your pocket.

Thanks for sharing. ----Dave

#1158460 - 11/07/19 09:23 AM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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Thanks for listening and commenting, Dave. Yeah, I'm hoping nobody here has a dog in the fight. I value advice on the song more than a Brexit brawl LOL. The main thing I'm going for is something people can sing easily, so a strong, simple melody that people can belt out in unison is what' it's all about smile.

#1158550 - 11/10/19 11:33 AM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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Just for the heck of it, I made a video for this one. A prize for whoever can name all the countries shown. smile

The video is here: The Same Sun Shines On Us All - Video by Gavin Sinclair & The Mysterious Beings

#1158554 - 11/10/19 01:16 PM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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Hi Gavin
Haven't watched the video but I enjoyed the song.
Solid vocals and lyrics - the stars of the show for me. smile
You could end with some wailing bagpipes IMO smile
The world needs songs like this to bring folks together - we all do look up at the same sun n'est pas?
Good stuff
Paul

#1158556 - 11/10/19 03:08 PM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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Great minds think alike, Paul. This could definitely use bagpipes behind that last chorus. I originally had them in there, but the midi bagpipes sounded awful and nothing like the real thing. Sadly, I don't have an actual pipe band at my disposal. The neighbors complained, and I had to let them go.

#1158582 - 11/12/19 11:16 AM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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Hey Gavin!

I was really moved by this music and lyrics--congrats on a masterpiece! I like Paul would like to see this song fade out with the chorus music, bagpipes would be cool, but also maybe a full background men's choir as an outro. The reason is simply, this song's gravitational pull leaves the listener "not" wanting the song to end..........so ease our pain......

steady-eddie

#1158588 - 11/12/19 03:50 PM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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Thanks, Eddie. I'm pretty sure nobody has used the word masterpiece about one of my songs before LOL. I'm definitely keen on the choir and bagpipes, although I would need to be careful not to overdo it and end up with just a chaotic cacophony.

Bagpipes and communal singing behind a lead singer can be very powerful though, notably in this example, which really gets the blood stirring. Something to aim at smile
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7vkYiCdn834

I'm not sure about your idea for a fade-out. I see what you're saying, but I kind of feel that the song needs to have an ending, especially as it's designed to be sung, not just listened to. I could scrap the kids voices at the end and repeat the chorus.

#1158589 - 11/12/19 05:02 PM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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Hey Gavin,

What makes the art of music such a wonderful art is those of us that create that art through writing/melody/performance/arrangents/effects will all do it differently--and there really is no "one-way" for any song production or lyrical composition. Responses from your peer writers will always have sugs based on how "they feel" the music/story--so don't think myself or anyone is trying to change your artistic approach.

My thoughts on production/arrangement are always an endeavor how best to evoke an emotional theme; whether a song be chorus driven, a needed bridge, or a not needed bridge, a crescendo type ending, a fading ending, or just a quiet resolve. This song (for me) just felt like the chorus should take it out rather than a subtle resolve--not that it is better, or saying that you should change anything. But I share these optional production thoughts/suggestions with you for consideration or food for thought only.

Well done Gavin!

steady-eddie

#1158620 - 11/14/19 10:45 AM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: E Swartz]  
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Originally Posted by E Swartz
Hey Gavin,

What makes the art of music such a wonderful art is those of us that create that art through writing/melody/performance/arrangents/effects will all do it differently--and there really is no "one-way" for any song production or lyrical composition. Responses from your peer writers will always have sugs based on how "they feel" the music/story--so don't think myself or anyone is trying to change your artistic approach.

My thoughts on production/arrangement are always an endeavor how best to evoke an emotional theme; whether a song be chorus driven, a needed bridge, or a not needed bridge, a crescendo type ending, a fading ending, or just a quiet resolve. This song (for me) just felt like the chorus should take it out rather than a subtle resolve--not that it is better, or saying that you should change anything. But I share these optional production thoughts/suggestions with you for consideration or food for thought only.

Well done Gavin!

steady-eddie

Thanks again, Eddie (and sorry for the delay in replying). I am completely OK with all suggestions and appreciate them whether I use them or not. Your suggestion of the chorus taking us out is a good one. I'm going to look at ways to do that without discarding the kids' voices. I played this at my local NSAI meeting on Tuesday and noticed that people were singing along to the chorus, so it would seem to be the strong point of the song.

#1158625 - 11/14/19 07:01 PM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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A song that would work for leavers and remainers. Not sure if that was your intention. Could also be played with a different rythm (slow march).
Well written, Gavin. No mistaking the touch of Irish in the melody.

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#1158634 - 11/16/19 09:22 PM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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Good job Gavin.

If I was a Brit, I would have voted for brexit, but still enjoyed the sentiment.
Maybe because I like what I know of you.

Martin

#1158636 - 11/16/19 10:50 PM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Martin Lide]  
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Originally Posted by Martin Lide
Good job Gavin.

If I was a Brit, I would have voted for brexit, but still enjoyed the sentiment.
Maybe because I like what I know of you.

Martin

Well, from a purely statistical viewpoint, if you were English and old you would have voted that way LOL. This song is for the young people and the Scots who feel shafted. That's why I plan to include young voices at the end and also why I gave it a Scottish feel and featured Scotland in the lyrics in the hope that, once we get our independence, our European friends will let us back in purely on the strength of my song. How could they not? smile

Glad you enjoyed it Martin.

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Young people always invite wolves into the barn.
Because they want to believe that because a wolf looks something like their Labrador Retriever...the wolf will love them just as much as the Lab.
But, alas...

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#1158649 - Yesterday at 03:58 PM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Gavin Sinclair]  
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You've got it the wrong way around, Martin.

"Get that damned wolf out of here!"
"But, Grandad, it's a Labrador Retriever."
"It's a bloody wolf!"
"Put your glasses on, Grandad."
"I don't need no glasses. It's a wolf."
"Here's a certificate from the Kennel Club, saying it's a Labrador Retriever."
"It's fake. Here's a real one."
"But Grandad, it's in Russian."
"We knew what to do with wolves back in my young day."
"It's a Labrador Retriever. It just barked."
"Wolves can bark. I read it on the Internet."
"No, they can't."
"Bloody wolves coming over here and telling us what to do!"
"Grandma, please tell Grandad he's being silly."
"How about a nice cup of tea?"

In this case, Martin, the Labrador Retriever really is a Labrador Retriever. Woof!


#1158650 - Yesterday at 04:07 PM Re: The Same Sun Shines On Us All [Re: Vicarn]  
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Originally Posted by Vicarn
A song that would work for leavers and remainers. Not sure if that was your intention. Could also be played with a different rythm (slow march).
Well written, Gavin. No mistaking the touch of Irish in the melody.

Vic

Thanks Vic. I'm not sure how it would work for remainers, but I'm happy enough if it does. It's not a negative take on remaining, but a positive view of Europe. I thought of the melody as more Scottish than Irish, but they're very closely related, of course.

When I think of a slow march, I think of a slowed down 3/4 time. The kind of thing you would see at military funerals or Remembrance Sunday when soldiers step on the first beat and pause on beats 2 and 3. Is that what you mean? Since it's already in 3/4, it would just be a case of slowing it down.

Thanks for listening. I always appreciate your comments and find them helpful.


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