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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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Trying to steal back Time Verse I think it’s more about being young Than how things used to be But I still long for the good old days Before life got to me. Pre chorus I feel that it’s tragic I’ve lost the magic That came with being young. Look at what time has done. Chorus Piled on the years, wore me down. Dulled the shine in my eyes. Now here I am, one tired guy Trying to steal back time. Verse Think it’s more about being free Than how things are these days Guess I still miss who I was More than I’d like to say. Pre chorus I feel that it’s tragic I’ve lost the magic That came with being young. Look at what time has done. Chorus Piled on the years, wore me down. Dulled the shine in my eyes. Now here I am, one tired guy Trying to steal back time. Bridge Gathering up the yesterdays. Walking down memory lane. Trying to hold on to what I can. Before it all slips away.
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The rhythm in my head as I read this says the prechorus would do without one line. The third line would then propel you into the chorus instead of being an answer to the line before.
Pre chorus I feel that it’s tragic I’ve lost the magic Look at what time has done
Marty my home Experience is that marvelous thing that enables you to recognize a mistake when you make it again!
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