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Mutlu
by Gary E. Andrews - 04/15/24 07:08 PM
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The Heart wants what the Heart wants
The heart wants what the heart wants When it comes to love. Says to hell with consequence When it comes to love.
When it wants to dance it dances. When it wants to sing it sings. It’s up to taking chances To see what it will bring.
Oh it knows its risky business But it don’t give a damn. It’s willing to take chances. It don’t stop to make a plan.
The heart wants what the heart wants When it comes to love. Says to hell with consequence When it comes to love.
When it wants to dance it dances. When it wants to sing it sings. It’s up to taking chances To see what it will bring.
Ain’t no rhyme or reason. It ain’t one for the rules. It won’t be the first time It has been a fool.
The heart wants what the heart wants When it comes to love. Says to hell with consequence When it comes to love.
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Great song! I say the better with catchiness the better the song, which really is inspiring after having written a lot of my songs that are even in the least bit too much to handle, and that's good. Song that sticks in your head unfortunately can suck depending on the melody and where the lyrics go, so depending how far you want to take your effort you should probably think over how the lyrics hook and share the mp3 here for melodic feedback as well.
Just thoughts to put out there, but otherwise I think you're getting somewhere great with your lyrics. Don't forget to share your mp3 when it's ready! If you want anyways
Last edited by LunaAesthetica; 10/25/19 12:15 PM.
Aries. INFP-T. Artist of all trades. Listener and creator of vast, unexpected musical genre writings/compositions. Art is the journey of a free soul. -Alev Oguz http://soundcloud.com/lunasimone
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Unfortunately I'm not a musician.
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